Poem Thread

[Roxter79]

I'll be on my way to NY tonight I won't be back till Wednesday

 

[xCourxCorex]

Aww, have fun Sam!!!

 

[Roxter79]

maybe its too late to save a young girls heart that's long stopped beating

 

[yoyo93]

Please Except Me

I have green eyes, you have blue
I hav tan skin, you do not
I have blonde hair, you have brown.

I have braces, so do you
I don't have my ears periced, neither do you
I like TV so do you.

I don't swim, you do
I like jeans, you do not.

I like chocolate, so do you
I like purple, so do you.

We are completly differnt
Yet ezcactly the same.

(this is A poem I worte about my BFF)

Tell me if you like it please! ​

 

[Roxter79]

It's cute

 

[yoyo93]

uh.......thanks......

 

[Roxter79]

well you asked for an opinion. At least you have a best friend.




I saw you tonight
Your brown hair cut barely past the ear
Your teeth shinning as your smile dazzles me.
It’s like my mind is emptied of everything other it.

I heard your voice tonight
The deep mellow tone that I adore
I can’t get the tone out of my ears, it’s as if the words continue to ring although you aren’t talking

I longed for your touch tonight
To grab your hand and place it in mine
It’s like you were taunting me by flaunting the hand that I longed to hold
It’s almost as if I’m in love.

 

[yoyo93]

thats cool

 

[Roxter79]

So let me drown so I can breathe again
I'm through choking and suffocating
On alter egos and alterior motives
Which weigh you down and take control of-
The way you are and the things that you need
The life you live and the dreams that you dream...
Distort and blur all in slow motion-
They broke you down and now youre broken.
And its sadder than the saddest movie
I ever saw but without the beauty
So I stopped watching, I stopped caring
I lost all interest and I stopped wearing
These plastic smiles, I'll wash my hands clean
I'll forget that you f o r g o t about me
And I'll live the life, the big city feeling
Cause its better than suburban dreaming
Living off the friends that hate you
Who talk **** on me-
Like I dont know who my real friends are anymore-
No I dont know you anymore.

 

[TheBellhop]

do you enjoy doing this i hear you calling me like you know me
by heart but i don't think you do acting like you doesn't make
me smarter and your silent destroying friends slowly chip away
and you become more like them every day i don't understand
the pleasure you find in hurting innocent people like you can't
talk to me like you don't hold my key anymore like the way you
told me saturday you still loved me and i know it's a cliche but
it gets irritating you're irritating me your posse is irritating me
like i said before the only reason you say you know me is so i
am tricked into believing you and you have a chair to lean on
but this chair is about to crack and let you f a l l down to let you
tumbling down into an abyss a cold abyss and thus ends my run
on sentence about you.

 

[Roxter79]

wow you don't even know how much I loved that

 

[TheBellhop]

awww thanks! I've been silently admiring your poems and decided to post mine, so thanks!

 

[Roxter79]

awww thanks. Not all of them are mine, but a lot of them are strong feelins of mine. Some of them are though, but thanks none the less. That really hit home though becuase I've lost all my friends and I'm kind of okay with it, but I did enjoy that

 

[TalkisCheap]

To think about you
Is like killing myself.
Slowly
But surely
It's killing me
Not having you
By
My
Side.
In my dreams
You love me
Like I have
Always
Loved you.
But then I wake from my
Heavenly
Illusion and realize
It was just that.
My silly fantasy.
Your love exsists only in my
Dreams.

 

[7heaven92]

The sun shinning bright on shimmering water,
I see my reflection yet again.
Looking at the water, my heart beats faster,
Because something tells me I'm not alone.

For the water is flowing,
But not that fast.
And the fish are swimming,
But I don't care.
For they are what keep me from leaving here.

The wind flows south as south as can be,
And the chiling air just welcomes me.
Seeing the water, bright as can be,
Is one of its best qualities.

I can't wait to go,
Day after day.
I can't wait to go,
To the secert spot again today.


I know it is really bad, but I had to write a poem for this contest for school.

 

[TheBellhop]

I decide whether or not to accept this fate
I see you staring in the window. I see you
staring
at me while I'm staring at the wall. the eyes
I look upon are ones that are filled with sorrow.
they seem to gaze into my heart and back again
all the world
just stopped
now
I'm still debating my fate. should I call you or let
the phone lay dead in my hand. the dial tone is
there. I know you'll pick up on the other side.
I try to go on day by day. I tell myself it's just a
stupid crush
and I repeat the words. stupid, stupid, stupid in
my head. I hang the phone up. I do other tasks.
Well, I try to do other tasks. but my mind always
travels back to you. I call you in my head.
I reverse the words and put them back again.
I rehearse the words I'll say to you on the phone.
again. and again.
but i never do call you.
i never do.

 

[TheBellhop]

To think about you
Is like killing myself.
Slowly
But surely
It's killing me
Not having you
By
My
Side.
In my dreams
You love me
Like I have
Always
Loved you.
But then I wake from my
Heavenly
Illusion and realize
It was just that.
My silly fantasy.
Your love exsists only in my
Dreams.

I like how it seperates and the simplicity...very cool caroline!

Sam, I want to hear more of your poems...

 

[Roxter79]

Finally people that post good poems I'll post more in a few minutes

 

[Roxter79]

empty another bottle & let me tear you to pieces.
this is me wishing you into the worst situations.
i'm the kind of kid that can't let anything go;
but you wouldnt' know a good thing
if it came up & slit your throat.
your remorse hasn't fallen on deaf ears,
rather ones that just don't care.
cause i know that you're in between arms somewhere;
next to heartbeats where you shouldn't be asleep.
now i'll teach you a lesson for keeping secrets from me.
take your taste back, peel back your skin.
& try to forget how it feels inside.
you should try saying no once in a while

 

[disneygrl16]

I like others poetry more than my own this is my fave poem:
Mad Girl's Love Song

"I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead;
I lift my lids and all is born again.
(I think I made you up inside my head.)

The stars go waltzing out in blue and red,
And arbitrary blackness gallops in:
I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead.

I dreamed that you bewitched me into bed
And sung me moon-struck, kissed me quite insane.
(I think I made you up inside my head.)

God topples from the sky, hell's fires fade:
Exit seraphim and Satan's men:
I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead.

I fancied you'd return the way you said,
But I grow old and I forget your name.
(I think I made you up inside my head.)

I should have loved a thunderbird instead;
At least when spring comes they roar back again.
I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead.
(I think I made you up inside my head.)"