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[Em&Em]

ok whatever u say

Just wait and see. I have already displayed some of my ditziness on here with responding to stuff and totally not understanding the most simply things.

 

[wdwllamadancer]

lmao thanks i took that

cool!

 

[marypops!]

KELSEY! You're in England tomorrow XD

You decided when you're coming to Lark in the Park?

 

[princesskelz]

my little cousin is disabled so i kinda have a connection with them. i would love to work at a place like that. the camp on there shirts was Camp i can

 

[Minnie Squeaks]

Just wait and see. I have already displayed some of my ditziness on here with responding to stuff and totally not understanding the most simply things.

fine...ur a ditz!

 

[Em&Em]

 

[RaggedyAnnPrincess]

They're should be a breakdancing smiley....

 

[princesskelz]

KELSEY! You're in England tomorrow XD

You decided when you're coming to Lark in the Park?

good news and bad news!

ur hearing the bad news......
my aunt said she wants to take us places we didnt go to last year and i told her about u and she said mabye.

good news im still going to England!

omgz DINNER be back in a minute

 

[wdwllamadancer]

KELSEY! You're in England tomorrow XD

You decided when you're coming to Lark in the Park?

kelsey, you are going to england?! i am going on october. its awesome!
havee fun!!

 

[Em&Em]

Byeya Kels


I am going to ask my Mom about the Maryland Dis meet. I know she is going to say No , but I might as well ask.

 

[marypops!]

OK. Just need to let you know, i'll be helping in the Inspiration Tent on Wednesday and Friday, and in this big blue tent on the 2 Saturdays helping on the badge machine. They're all between 2:00-4:00

 

[Minnie Squeaks]

im getting off for now.....
bye everybody!!!

 

[wdwllamadancer]

im getting off for now.....
bye everybody!!!

byee

 

[diva122094]

Heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeey everyone!
I'm backkkkkk!

 

[wdwllamadancer]

heyy alex!

 

[CastawayJ]

help, editor needed, this is a report my mom is making me write so I will be ready for school



The whole book is filled with fighting between human and mythical forces. This fighting is almost all sprung from the need for revenge. After Grendel attacked the mead hall, Hrothgar searched for someone to defend them. Although this was a huge act towards protection, he would have let Grendel be. This brings about a second act of revenge. Grendel’s mother comes out and attacks the mead hall for killing Grendel. Now because of all they have seen, the Geats should have tried to bargain for peace right? Wrong, once again Beowulf reacts with violence and slays the second beast. Fortunately there is no more death this time because there are no more creatures on Grendel’s line.

50 years later a simple man goes for a hike and finds a cave. This cave brings him out into a room of treasure. As all of humanity, this man is greedy and takes some treasure. However, the dragon notices and sets out for what, a nice cup of tea? No! He acts up for revenge. As he starts to burn Geatland Beowulf must again fight for the protection of the people. But that is not his only motive no; he wants to avenge those killed in the fight already. No one is safe from this kind of emotion. These deaths could have been avoided in more modern times; however, it fits well in its place and moves the story along very effectively.

 

[wdwllamadancer]

i will help edit. hold on though

 

[diva122094]

heyy alex!

Heeeeeeeeeeeey what's up

 

[marypops!]

What is that report for?

 

[wdwllamadancer]

help, editor needed, this is a report my mom is making me write so I will be ready for school



The whole book is filled with fighting between human and mythical forces. (1)This fighting is almost all sprung from the need for revenge.After Grendel attacked the mead hall, Hrothgar searched for someone to defend (2)them. (3)Although this was a huge act towards protection, he would have let Grendel be. This brings about a second act of revenge. Grendel’s mother comes out and attacks the mead hall for killing Grendel. Now because of all they have seen, the Geats should have tried to bargain for peace right? Wrong, once again Beowulf reacts with violence and slays the second beast. Fortunately there is no more death this time because there are no more creatures on Grendel’s line.

50 years later a simple man goes for a hike and finds a cave. This cave brings him out into a room of treasure. As all of humanity, this man is greedy and takes some treasure. However, the dragon notices and sets out for what, a nice cup of tea? No! He acts up for revenge. As he starts to burn Geatland Beowulf must again fight for the protection of the people. But that is not his only motive no; he wants to avenge those killed in the fight already. No one is safe from this kind of emotion. These deaths could have been avoided in more modern times; however, it fits well in its place and moves the story along very effectively.

1. I think this sentence would make more sense as "Almost all of the fighting is sprung from the need of revenge".
2. you might want to say the geats or his people instead of the pronoun.
3. i am sorry but this sentence doesn't make sense to me.

the rest looks good to me. hope i could be of some help!