Need creative help fast.....

[PrincessasMommy]

I need help!!!


I have been trying to come up with a way to suprise our oldest daughter as we are leaving this Saturday!!!!!

Her 12th birthday is this Friday!!

So, my friend suggested I put her pic and a poem revealing it in our local newspaper which we would show her at her family party Friday night!

I think it is a great idea but I need a poem.....any ideas??? PLEASE

It's a surprise for her sister's too.

I need to submit the information by 8 am tomorrow!!

..in advance!

 

[noahdove]

I have no poem, I wanted to surprise my 8 year old great nephew, so I wrapped several things up that he would use on a trip, and I numbered them, and after a few items, he couldn't figure it out, I had a note written on Disney paper, and as he read his smile got bigger and bigger..I had a Mickey can in the bottom of the bag with coins in it, and I wrote Peyton's Disney fund on it...well....he was soooooooo excited...I did get him the Disney for Kids guide book, so now, he can read and increase his vocabulary at the same time...we have 298 days left...but his smile sealed the deal,,it will be his first trip I will be taking my step-granddaughter also, but she doesn't know yet It will be part of her Christmas gift from her dad and stepmom, and my other daughter and us...can you just see her pretty face I am so excited....enjoy the special time as your children will grow up tooooooo fast.

 

[Perditamarie]

Oh, this was fun. Here is what I came up with...hope it gets the ball rolling:

Happy birthday my dear NAME and I really must say
How very special is your birthday
The day you came to us was such a gift
And now we have one for you to make your lips lift
This message is so much more than a greeting
It‘s an invitation for a very swell meeting
So dust off your tiara and fluff up your dresses
We are going to be meeting some princesses
And ducks and bears and definitely a mouse
Mickey has invited us to come to his house
So pack up your bags and grab every last girl
We are all going to Mickey’s World
Oh, by the way we have no time to borrow
We are on our way first thing tomorrow

 

[PrincessasMommy]

PerditaMarie - THANK YOU!!! That is awesome!! I don't know if I can fit the entire thing though so may condense it but it was a HUGE help!!

Any other shorter ideas???

 

[Perditamarie]

Oh it was fun. Try taking out some lines to make it shorter:

Happy birthday NAME
This message is so much more than a greeting
It‘s an invitation for a very swell meeting
So grab all your sisters, we're heading down south
We're leaving tomorrow to see a quite famous mouse

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[PrincessasMommy]

PERFECT!!!

YOU ROCK!!!

THANKS AGAIN!!

 

[MousekaMaddi]

nicely done