My Writing Project - First Chapter Finished

[BabyPiglet]

Oh, and one more thing. I couldn't help but think about Twilight when I was reading your first post, and then later you mentioned 'Allie's' dislike of blood. I suggest to not copy Twilight too much. Do something to get your mind off of it.

Good luck.

 

[ThePin Princess]

Oh, and one more thing. I couldn't help but think about Twilight when I was reading your first post, and then later you mentioned 'Allie's' dislike of blood. I suggest to not copy Twilight too much. Do something to get your mind off of it.

Good luck.

Oh, yea, Allie's dislike of blood is because she has a bleeding disorder. I can't remember the name for what its called but a girl on my cheerleading team two years ago had a disorder where she can't stop bleeding. So thats the definition of the blood dislike. And its kinda the same along the love but not really. These children live in a small, rich, priviledged town, where their parents are well known and wealthy.

And i must admit its hard not for me to think about twilight i'm just obcessed! lol. I've tried a million things to get it off my mind but nothing works. Nothing but school work except for this project!

I'm trying not to copy it but in your opinions is it too close if ( and this has a total different reasoning)

okay so Allie and Jackson meet when a car his headed straight for Allie and then her bleeding kicks in, she doesn't know who he is or what is going on because of her multiply black outs. But the car tried to hit her on purpose because he father is a politician and her mother is an actress. And their were people who are trying to endanger her family and friends. Someone shot her brother in the leg when he was snowboarding over vacation and the same people tried to hit her.

... I watch to much Law and Order ...

 

[ThePin Princess]

Oh, yea, Allie's dislike of blood is because she has a bleeding disorder. I can't remember the name for what its called but a girl on my cheerleading team two years ago had a disorder where she can't stop bleeding. So thats the definition of the blood dislike. And its kinda the same along the love but not really. These children live in a small, rich, priviledged town, where their parents are well known and wealthy.

Quoting myself is weird. But does anyone know the name for that. Or if its even real?

 

[imabrat]

She could have low platlets. I don't know if there's an actual name for it.

Platelets are what clot your blood when you bleed. If you have a high number of platelets, you're more prone to a heart attack because your blood clots easier and quicker than normal. If you have low platelets, you clot very slowly or you don't clot at all.

Another blood disorder is Anemia. Maybe that's what you were talking about?

 

[ThePin Princess]

She could have low platlets. I don't know if there's an actual name for it.

Platelets are what clot your blood when you bleed. If you have a high number of platelets, you're more prone to a heart attack because your blood clots easier and quicker than normal. If you have low platelets, you clot very slowly or you don't clot at all.

Another blood disorder is Anemia. Maybe that's what you were talking about?

I have no idea what i'm talking about. I think i'll just have it be one of those unknown diseases where she gets black outs from blood and cuts that are days old will start bleeding and won't stop. Something alone the lines of that.

 

[ThePin Princess]

If anyone is interseted i'm trying to get the first section of the first chapter onto Adobe Reader then i'll post it on here

 

[ThePin Princess]

Heyy everyone.

I need some help. I don't take chemistry yet cause that's a high school class in my town, but Jackson and Allie get to know each other while working on a chemistry project, so what are projects you would have in chemistry?

Thank you
The (procrastinating) Pin Princess

I just want everyone to know something. Yes i am a huge twilight fan and i love stephenie's writing, but no i am not copying here. sometimes it seems like it but Allie is modeled after a combanation of my bestfriend and myself. And i know chemistry is like biology in the sense that they are both science related but that was the class i meet my crush, who moved to my town, in. Also, these two characters knew each other before Jackson moved to Redline Valley, they just didnt know it. I just wanted to make that clear.

 

[ThePin Princess]

anyone?? chemistry??

 

[ThePin Princess]

I'm so proud of myself everyone!

I finished the first chapter of my book! All though my book type thing doesnt have a title it has a story line! the first chapter is 21 pages and i was so happy when i finished!!! Just thought i'd let you all know

edit: i found out something for chemistry so that situation is over with

 

[HSMndLKfan92]

congrats! i was going to suggest throwing elements into the bunsen burner, and then record the color changes.

that's what we did last year when we learned about the absorption and emission spectrums.

 

[ThePin Princess]

congrats! i was going to suggest throwing elements into the bunsen burner, and then record the color changes.

that's what we did last year when we learned about the absorption and emission spectrums.

I'll have to google that! lol haha.. i have know idea what that means.