The picture is good, to my eyes. There are some of us that don't see that well after many more years than she has been around. The best part is that you are sharing something that matters to you with your daughters, and they in turn are taking to it - now that is great quality time! And I'm willing to bet that time invested now will be repaid many times over in the future (spoken as the dad of a soon-to-be 25-year-old DD, who even though she has her degrees and her own home, still considers mom & dad among her best friends, and we can spend hours just talking about all kinds of things, not surprising, but one of which is photography).
Good Job!
Fred