my 12 year old's essay for English class:

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The place I want to talk about is magical. It is Walt Disney World. It’s filled with a lot of great and fabulous things. What I am going to talk about is things like the hotels, the beautiful restaurants and the amazing theme parks. These are things I’m going to talk about.
First, let’s talk about the hotels. There are so many different hotels. The times I went there, we stayed in Dixie Landings, the Polynesian Hotel, the Beach Club, and the Boardwalk Inn. My favorite hotel out of those four was the Boardwalk Inn. There was so much to do there, like games, surreys, shows and gift shops. You have to go there to see what it’s like. It’s so great.
Now let’s talk about the beautiful restaurants. There are so many restaurants. My favorite one was Ohana. The first time I went there, I asked for ketchup, and they made me and my sister dance around with pineapples on our heads. It was so funny. I would do anything to go back there now. I’m “Disney-sick”.
The last thing I’m going to talk about is the amazing theme parks. There is so much to say about this. There are four parks. They are Animal Kingdom, Epcot, MGM Studios and Magic Kingdom. My favorite park is Magic Kingdom. I like to ride on Space Mountain, Pirates of the Caribbean and the Peter Pan ride. It’s so much fun. If you want to have so much fun, go here and I guarantee you won’t want to leave. In the parks there are many things. There are rides, shows, gift shops and much, much more.
If you want to go here, what are you waiting for? Come now. If you don’t believe what I say, see for yourself. Take it from someone who knows, it’s for people who love to have fun. If you liked this essay, promise that one day you will go to Walt Disney World.
 
I think she's headed for a career in sales or PR:D This has me wanting to pack my bags and go now!:D
 

Yep, I think she is trying to tell you something.
Your DD is sick. She said so herself.
You would be neglecting her if you didn't try to 'cure' her disneyitis.
Take her to WDW soon. Oh and it is very contagious!
Take the younger DD also.;)
 
An A+ for your daughter. What a magical essay. I think a trip is the cure!!:teeth: :teeth:
 
What a sweet essay!
Take that girl to WDW!!!:D
 
Oh man....I've been wondering what was wrong with me! Now I know ...thanks to your dd. I'm "Disney sick"!!!!! Now that's a keeper!!!!:p Thanks for sharing!!!
 
Just what I love to see- an appeciation for Disney at an early age! When I was in 5th grade, we were once assigned to draw a picture of our favorite place. What did I draw? Sleeping Beauty castle!
 



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