wlwilliams9
"It's green and evil...I call it greevil!!" -Dr. H
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- Apr 7, 2007
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Thank you, Thank you, Thank you!!!

Thank you Princess Aurora for your wonderful gift!! Emily was over the moon!! She is so excited! You definitely made our day, but you spent too much!!!
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Thank you, Thank you, Thank you!!!![]()
Ok...
Who here is an English major? Wendy, aren't you?
I need help with this sentence because I don't think its flows properly.
Along with fuel efficiency, environmental impact, cost, maintenance cost, and safety ratings also are factors in making this momentous decision to purchase a new vehicle.
Perhaps
Fuel efficiency, environmental impact, safety ratings and purchasing and maintenance costs are also factors in making this momentous decision to purchase a new vehicle.
Auugh I don't think that will workYou guys probably need the whole paragraph for reference LOL
here
You may have heard of hybrid vehicles from time to time. They are considered the newest craze in car buying lately. A hybrid vehicle is a car that not only uses gasoline to power the engine, but also uses an electric motor. Hybrid-car.org says, Hybrid cars have no use for plugs, as they are amply charged by the movement of the wheels, and storing the kinetic energy that is generated through a process called regenerative braking. From this, one may discern that hybrids are an excellent choice when basing a car buying decision on fuel efficiency. Along with fuel efficiency, environmental impact, cost, maintenance cost, and safety ratings also are factors in making this momentous decision to purchase a new vehicle.
How about...
Along with fuel efficiency, there are other factors considered when making the momentus decision to purchase a new car. Consumers should take into account the car's environmental impact, purchase price, maintenance costs, and safety ratings.
I also think that this sentence: "They are considered the newest craze in car buying lately." shouldn't have the lately since you already stated they were the newest craze.
Oh and I'm not the English major, I was Elem. Education and Science, so take my suggestions for what they're worth!!![]()
Ahh that's just what I wanted it to say! Whatever the major is, you helped LOL. And thanks for pointing out the repetitiveness of "lately" and "newest".
I may just have to bribe you to proofread my paper!
Sweet, my package to Emily seems to have covered that!![]()
So how was your weekend?
I like the dresses!! I LOVE the last one, the yellow/gold! I wish I could wear something like that, but my ****s would be hanging out!!![]()