Invitation Wording Help

[lpizzuro123]

We want to use the following wording for our DFTW this coming November. My dad paying for most of the wedding and I want to include his name in the invite but not sure how to word it with his name also.

Does anyone have any suggestions.

Once in a while
Right in the middle of an ordinary life
Love gives us a fairy tale…

IN THE SPIRIT OF THE MAGIC
THAT BROUGHT THEM TOGETHER

Linda Smith
AND
Sheldon Jones

INVITE YOU TO JOIN THEM FOR A
FAIRY TALE WEDDING

THE BEGINNING OF THEIR
“HAPPILY EVER AFTER”

AT THE HAPPIEST PLACE ON EARTH

MONDAY, NOVEMBER 10, 2008
9:00 A.M.

WALT DISNEY WORLD
EPCOT
ORLANDO, FLORIDA

Thanks,
Linda

 

[hmgolden]

I don't have a suggestion for you, all the options I have been able to come up with don't seem to flow right. But I wanted to bump this to see if someone else could help.

 

[lpizzuro123]

Thanks alot for the bump. Yes, I have been trying to put it together but like you said I can't seem to get it to flow. I might stop by my local party store that sells cards and see if they have any suggestions.

Linda

 

[lpizzuro123]

Thanks alot for the bump. Yes, I have been trying to put it together but like you said I can't seem to get it to flow. I might stop by my local party store that sells cards and see if they have any suggestions.

Linda

 

[imnotaprincess]

How about:

Once in a while
Right in the middle of an ordinary life
Love gives us a fairy tale…

IN THE SPIRIT OF THE MAGIC
THAT BROUGHT THEM TOGETHER
Dad Smith invites you to the fairytale wedding of

Linda Smith
AND
Sheldon Jones

THE BEGINNING OF THEIR
“HAPPILY EVER AFTER”

I think that could work.....

 

[Jcricket Fan]

How about this:

Once in a while
Right in the middle of an ordinary life
Love gives us a fairy tale…

IN THE SPIRIT OF THE MAGIC
THAT BROUGHT THEM TOGETHER


Mr. XXX Smith Invites you to join

Linda Smith
AND
Sheldon Jones

FOR THEIR FAIRY TALE WEDDING

Usually the one who does the paying does the inviting (in theory!) so having your dad's name with the term "invites" would be acceptable.

Have a wonderful wedding!
Peace.
Colleen

 

[lpizzuro123]

Thanks so much - that sounds pretty good. Definately in the running.

We need to get our invitations done soon. We are heading down to Disney in May and want to send out the invitations when we get back.

Linda

 

[Jcricket Fan]

Hey imnotaprincess I walked away from my post before I sent it came back and saw you had the same idea!

I am a really slow typer!

Peace.
Colleen

 

[imnotaprincess]

No Problem Colleen!

Linda, We're leaving for our planning session on April 30th and I can't wait! I hope to get our invites ordered when we get home...and were using some of the same verse that you are...I just love it and it's so perfect for the DFTW!

 

[hiwaygal]

*bump*

 

[Lorelei528]

Thanks Denise!!!