i need some creative help!!

[scarlett873]

i am surprising my husband with tickets to tonight's mannheim steamroller concert...we're going to go to dinner at the Old Spaghetti Factory and then i plan to give him a decorated envelope to open that has the tickets inside...

i was wondering if anyone could help me out with some kind of a little poem that might offer him clues as to what the tickets could be for...i want to print it out on the envelope...

i can be creative but i can't come up with any kind of poem!! maybe something about a surprise and christmas and trains or something...

i would appreciate any help from you guys...i know that we have some very creative ones on this board...

Please please please!!!
thanks guys!!!

 

[dizneenut]

Where's Dream and Lucystorm? They are great with poems!!

 

[newmousecateer]

Jodie, Bonnie, get over here and help her out!

 

[Dream]

Hee hee...I'm here but I SHOULD be out Christmas shopping!!

OK Scarlett, I'll give it a whirl!

Now that you have had your dinner
I want to continue this evening with a winner!
Inside this envelope is something melodic
To put you "in the mood" for the holidays really quick!
Into this envelope oh so small
I have packed my wishes for you...so tall!
I wish you peace, contentment, relaxation and love
From melodies played as if from above.
A special night...just you and me
And maybe a little "symphony"!



How's that? Can you work with it? Gotta run but I will check back in later to see if you need something different!! Have fun tonight!!!

 

[scarlett873]

i like that one!!

anyone else?

 

[FergieTCat]

Twas 2 weeks before Christmas
And I shopped early this year
I hope you enjoy
This gift for your ears

(Best I can do right now)

 

[scarlett873]

bump

 

[Chrissi Pooh]

Giving it a try...


See the STEAM just ROLLING off
this meal we've had just the two of us

I have a gift from my heart
for a wonderful evening we will start

So open slowly and let it last
or open quickly and get there fast

I hope you enjoy this music to your ears
and treasure it all for years and years!!!

 

[scarlett873]

thanks for your help guys!!! i kind of came up with one inspired by chrissi pooh's!!

let's hope he enjoys his "surprise"!!!

 

[Chrissi Pooh]

Make sure we get an update tomorrow on how it all works out and if you don't mind letting us see your finished product!!! Good luck and have fun!!

 

[scarlett873]

the surprise went great!!! traffic was so bad though that we didn't make it to the spaghetti factory...so we chose a different restaurant...but he was very surprised!!! and he loved it!!!! i'll have to post a picture of what i put on the envelope once i get home...i'll try and do that this weekend!!

thanks for your help!!