BabyPiglet
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So some of you have heard me talk about the group project I'm doing right now in my civilizations class. We have to analyze a historical document (The Tale of the Eloquent Peasant), and I'm in a group with 4 guys.
The 'leader' (we had to pick one on the first day and he volunteered) didn't contact us about it for almost 1 1/2 weeks after it was assigned. Well, now it and a presentation is due on Friday, and we're just now getting around to the rough draft.
There were 5 questions that needed to be answered in the (5 page) essay, so we each took a question and tried to make it around a page long. Nobody knew what anyone else was going to write. We each turned in our answer to the leader, and he put together the paper.
Well this morning he emails us the rough draft. HOLY. CRAP. This paper sucks really really bad. I don't know where these guys learned their freaking grammar, but they need to go back. It sounds like a kindergartener looked up a bunch of big words, stuck them together, and hoped that they would fit. The grammar and spelling is hideous, everything is really repetitive, the whole paper is practically incoherent.
Anyway, he asked us to edit it, print it out, and give it to him in class today. The nice person I am, totally fixed just about everything. I corrected as much grammar and spelling as I could (I did this a few minutes before I left for class, so I didn't have time to do it perfectly). Re-arranged a few things so they made more sense. CUT a whole lotta the repetitive crap out. But it seemed kind of...un-fixable.
I gave it to him in class, he says 'Oh sweet, I was never so good at english so I knew the grammar sucked.' -_-
He just emailed me the 'revised' copy. IT STILL SUCKS. AGHHH. I don't know what his deal is, if he can't type of what, or if he's just ignorant of my editing. I might so strangle him, burn the paper, and write it all over myself.
I'm -headdesking- that I didn't volunteer to be the leader. I'm fighting the urge to just re-write the whole damn thing. THESE ARE COLLEGE KIDS FOR GOODNESS SAKES.
Sorry you had to listen to all that, and yay if you read it all.
The 'leader' (we had to pick one on the first day and he volunteered) didn't contact us about it for almost 1 1/2 weeks after it was assigned. Well, now it and a presentation is due on Friday, and we're just now getting around to the rough draft.
There were 5 questions that needed to be answered in the (5 page) essay, so we each took a question and tried to make it around a page long. Nobody knew what anyone else was going to write. We each turned in our answer to the leader, and he put together the paper.
Well this morning he emails us the rough draft. HOLY. CRAP. This paper sucks really really bad. I don't know where these guys learned their freaking grammar, but they need to go back. It sounds like a kindergartener looked up a bunch of big words, stuck them together, and hoped that they would fit. The grammar and spelling is hideous, everything is really repetitive, the whole paper is practically incoherent.
Anyway, he asked us to edit it, print it out, and give it to him in class today. The nice person I am, totally fixed just about everything. I corrected as much grammar and spelling as I could (I did this a few minutes before I left for class, so I didn't have time to do it perfectly). Re-arranged a few things so they made more sense. CUT a whole lotta the repetitive crap out. But it seemed kind of...un-fixable.
I gave it to him in class, he says 'Oh sweet, I was never so good at english so I knew the grammar sucked.' -_-
He just emailed me the 'revised' copy. IT STILL SUCKS. AGHHH. I don't know what his deal is, if he can't type of what, or if he's just ignorant of my editing. I might so strangle him, burn the paper, and write it all over myself.
I'm -headdesking- that I didn't volunteer to be the leader. I'm fighting the urge to just re-write the whole damn thing. THESE ARE COLLEGE KIDS FOR GOODNESS SAKES.
Sorry you had to listen to all that, and yay if you read it all.