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The Dark Dancer

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Here is one of my latest projects:

:artist:

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It is a portrait of my friend Staci (I made it for her because her B-day is next week and I wanted to suprise her):

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What do y'all think? Constructive criticism is always welcome, lol.
 

Very very nice! I know NOTHING about art...nevermind enough to make constructive criticism! It's beautiful!
 
beautiful!

maybe you should have dabbed some freckles in lightly on her nose.. and made her hair slightly curlier.. but.. I LOVE IT!
 
Thank you!

I am going to add the freckles right before I frame it (so they won't smudge).

As for the hair, I decided to leave it straight (the pic is when she curled it for dance recital) and her hair is normally very straight.

thank y'all for your suggestions and I really appreciate them! :goodvibes
 
I'm not good at drawing from a picture, I either draw when I'm looking at them, or from memory of just having looked at them. That is much better than I could do. I'm sure she'll love it.

ideas:

add her necklace or shade in her collar bone a little more. I always feel like i'm missing something with a flat neck, shoulder area. I like to have something interesting right there to bring the eyes down from her face to ehr shirt smoothly if that made sence.

and

a little more shading under her chin. it is something you didn't realize youre missing until you see it there.

just a few ideas. either way, i think it looks fantastic. I'm sure she'll love it.
 
Thank y'all! :goodvibes

Sparx said:
I'm not good at drawing from a picture, I either draw when I'm looking at them, or from memory of just having looked at them. That is much better than I could do. I'm sure she'll love it.

ideas:

add her necklace or shade in her collar bone a little more. I always feel like i'm missing something with a flat neck, shoulder area. I like to have something interesting right there to bring the eyes down from her face to ehr shirt smoothly if that made sence.

and

a little more shading under her chin. it is something you didn't realize youre missing until you see it there.

just a few ideas. either way, i think it looks fantastic. I'm sure she'll love it.


Thank you so much for the suggestions, Shelby. They really help! :thumbsup2
 
That's beautiful Sarah! I'm sure she'll love it! :goodvibes
 
I think it's really good.She should love it.You drew it very nice. :artist:
 


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