OOC: So quick background before you read: This was set during Half Blood Prince. Maxine (Max) was a 5th year Ravenclaw, and she's been surrounded by prophecies, and she finds out her younger 1st year Gryffindor brother Anthony (Tony) is going to die. Her four best friends, the other characters that were in the scene, are the Golden Trio and this guy named Adam. Earlier she got into a fight with Harry, stormed out and stumbled upon her brother's body. It's just mauled, he's wounded, scratched up, and has bled so much that he's in a pool of his own blood, so when Max falls down on her knees, she's kneeling in his blood and her clothes get all bloody. Plus, Max never cries, she's a tough-as-nails, brooding, dark, negative girl who has died and come back to life before. So, here it is (every time one of these ~ appears it's a new post):
Max: I cant believe him
..*looks up*
*Tony is lying sprawled on the ground. His eyes are unfocused and he is lying in a pool of blood. There are wounds all across his body. Max runs up to him. Tony is not breathing. There is no pulse. Max shakes him, but he does not stir or otherwise move.
Max: *whispering* Anthony Phineas Stone, I have failed you, and I regret it with all my heart. *lets out a piercing scream*
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Max: *falls to her knees in the pool of blood* *sadly* *almost whispering* *in shock* I failed him.........I couldn't protect him........He got murdered while I was selfishly arguing with Harry.........It's my fault, all my fault........I am truly alone now........I have nothing left.......
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Max: No, no it's not you. It's me. I should've kept a closer eye on him.
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Max: *crying* He's gone Adam. He's really gone. I-I can't........I can't believe it.
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Max: I-I-I- I'm sorry Harry. He's-he's gone. It hurts so bad. The tears are making my scar burn but-but I just can't stop crying! *sobs harder*
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Max: It is my fault. I co-couldn't be here for him in time! *crying*
Max: *notices his blood has stained her jeans* *starts crying hard again* C-c-c-call f-for a t-t-t-eacher.
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OOC: at this point Max isn't in control of her emotions at all.
Max: *Crying harder than she's ever cried in her whole life.*