Hey guys, can I have some opinions? **EDIT:Poetry Thread**

[Rockstar mentality]

I wrote a song/ poem. Idk which yt cause i havent sat down with my friend and added music 2 it yet. (keep in mind i wrote this after breaking wit my gf and my best friend got cheated on)

I see you standing alone in the rain
thinking no one should ever feel this kind of pain
dreaming and wondering about all the people you have lost
(could've, would've, should've, gone difrently)
your heart jumps at the the thougt.......
that you can't get them back at any cost

then you see that guy approaching from the distance
your mind races as u tell ureself (he's diffrent, he's diffrent)
you stand there staring eye to eye
then sudenly there is a sigh (please god, please)

our mind races as we come together
(have I finaly found the one I was ment for?)
together we stand, my eyes in his, his in mine,
we both know its ment to last for ever
true love, brighter then any rings shine
he makes me feel happpy even during the darkest days
hoping that til my death he will be the one that stays
her pretty face and his amazing grace
go together quicker then the fastest race

but all races are ment to end
our hearts slow down
we question all our thoughts
while suddenly doubt apperars
manipulating our every fears
and we start 2 think (was this a mistake?)
and in a flashh hes gone....
and Im left again standing alone in the rain

 

[STOPxmickeytime]

I write songs.
Basically just poems with melodies.
I might post some later, I just have to type them all up.