College Essay

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I started writing a college application essay, but I really can't end it. I'm not really that crazy about, but it's about Disney. If anyone wants to read and critique it, I'll PM it to you. I need a lot of help, especially with the ending, writing essays is not my strength.
 
My cousin had to do an influential person, and she picked Walt Disney, and talked about his contributions to family through parks, television, film, etc.
I'd love to read yours.
 

Has much as I would greatly LOVE to read it...I think for the safety of my sanity, I should refrain from asking to see it lol...

...I, too, am trying to get applications done and have been trying ridiculously hard to find the perfect ideas for college essays. Reading other, current, essays would shift my mind and confuse me more!! heh.

You are much farther than I am...lol. I am still waiting on recommendations let alone writing the essay! Oh bother.
 
Loves Disney said:
Has much as I would greatly LOVE to read it...I think for the safety of my sanity, I should refrain from asking to see it lol...

...I, too, am trying to get applications done and have been trying ridiculously hard to find the perfect ideas for college essays. Reading other, current, essays would shift my mind and confuse me more!! heh.

You are much farther than I am...lol. I am still waiting on recommendations let alone writing the essay! Oh bother.
I completely understand, I'm stressed out too. But if you need any help with your essay, don't be afraid to ask me.
 
I'm a freshman in HS, no way near in college, but just wanted to give you guys a GOOD LUCK on these essays I hear that stress you out sooo much!! :thumbsup2

-Stephanie
 
I have the rest of my applications filled out... I just have to write my essays today, email them to my acting teacher to be proof read(he's also an English teacher) and hopefully I'll have my applications sent tomorrow night!... mine are practically the same essay with one paragraph being school specific.

I feel so behind in this process... I only just decided to not apply to one of my schools... while my friends are already accepted to some of their top choices... it's crazy.

Anyway - Good luck all you oh-seveners! :)
 
I would LOVE to read it. I'm very good at essays. Thats the only reason why i'm in the honors english. I had to write one for a contest. The prize is a week at disney. I will find out the results mid November. Hopefully it was god enough.
 
SBubba18 said:
I would LOVE to read it. I'm very good at essays. Thats the only reason why i'm in the honors english. I had to write one for a contest. The prize is a week at disney. I will find out the results mid November. Hopefully it was god enough.
Wow, I'm crossing my fingers for you. I'm PMing you the essay now.
 
SBubba18 said:
I would LOVE to read it. I'm very good at essays. Thats the only reason why i'm in the honors english. I had to write one for a contest. The prize is a week at disney. I will find out the results mid November. Hopefully it was god enough.
I wish I had heard of that contest! Arg, our school never gets word of the good essay contests...

...last year the contest winner got a trip out to North Dakota. My best friend won it. I was happy for her. But I wouldn't care much to go out to ND heh, nothing to do...for me, at least.
 


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