Can you help me with this Birthday Party?

[devotedchristian]

First, can you critique this Birthday Party Invitation before I mail them out?


Basic Information: The party is for DS who will be 3 next month at a Local "Indoor Theme Park" with *actual* rides for the kids (Toddlers AND Teens) it's really cool.

We chose to have it *After* the naps: 4pm-6pm.

Elizabeth Moore,

As our honored guest, you will:
Enjoy Unlimited Playtime at the Maxx Maze (Indoor Playground, Socks Required)
Choose 5 rides of your choice anywhere in the “Park”
Be given 1 Game Card to use anywhere in the “Park”
Be served Pizza, Cake, Ice Cream and Unlimited Sodas

A light dinner will also be served for the Parents. We look forward to seeing you there!

What do you think?

Next Question: Is this enough food for the Parents? The kids eat free in the Package.

Menu (I have to use the facility's food, I cannot bring my own):

Wing Platter (45 wings)
Chips and Dip Platter (2) serves 10-15
Veggie Platter serves 10-15
Sandwich Platter serves 10-15
Whole Pepperoni Pizza serves 10-15
Cake
Ice Cream

I figure they could eat a little bit of everything and still fill up.

There should be 20 Adults/Parents.

 

[nickelsfamily]

I Think That Is All Sounds Great. I Especially Like The Honored Guest Part!! If It Were Me I Would Change The Soda Part To Drinks... Unlimited Drinks Even If It Is Soda Sounds Better To Me.

I Think That You Will Have Enough Food For The Adults, Chances Are They Won't All Eat Anyway!

Have Fun!

 

[Mom to Jordan]

The only thing I might change is to buy just pizza for the adults. Experence tells me that having diffent foods for adults and kids can spell trouble. Some child will want wings and mom will give them one and then they all want wings. Get the idea???
Also do not forget to plan for siblings. It amazes me how many parents just bring along little brother assuming that it is fine.

sounds like fun!!!!!!!!