notfrostyjosh
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There is a more up to date thread here: http://www.disboards.com/showthread.php?t=2624260
, but as a QA Specialist/Web Developer, you're going to hear it anyway! Some of these may be petty, but what can I say, these are the things that I see when I look at web pages (almost 9 years of web-based QA will do that to you). I'll start with my issues first, then the good stuff at the bottom so you don't leave the post thinking I'm a total (fill in whatever expletive you want here).
. I'd change it to "2009-2010 was a bizarre time for Orlando weather..." and then you can make mention of last year's "May Monsoons" as well.
)This is a month by month look at the cost, crowds, weather, and special events at Disney World.
- The cost section relates primarily to booking a room at a Disney-owned resort. The cost of theme park tickets, upgrades, and other add-ons generally does not change throughout the year.
- The weather section is based on the historical data available. For a look at the last 15 years of Orlando weather on any date, check Weather Underground. This is a handy reference tool, but make sure you look over more than just the past couple of years. 2010 was a bizarre year in Orlando weather-wise, including one of the coldest Januarys on record and one of the hottest fall seasons.
- The crowds section is based on data from the past several years. Generally speaking, the higher the price of a Disney resort room, the busier the Parks will be. For example, Value season usually has the smallest crowds and Peak and Holiday seasons see the highest crowds.
- Finally, I've included a brief description of the special events and other nuances throughout the year. This will help you plan around events that may adversely affect your vacation or you might want to tweak your plans to visit during a special event of particular interest. I link straight to the Disney website throughout this calendar so you can read more about the events or purchase tickets.



). Also chronologically by start of closure. So, for this month it should look similar to:
, just an observation)Changes to:“Jersey Week” is November 1st through 7th in 2010, with all New Jersey schools closing Thursday and Friday November 4th and 5th. While everyone from New Jersey does not visit Disney World, some do and it does noticeably increase crowds. Crowds are still low overall, but you will see a disproportionate amount of people visiting from the great state of New Jersey. We can just hope Snooki stays home
A slight change, but will greatly improve readability overall. Also, you forgot a period at the end of the last sentence“Jersey Week” is November 1st through 7th in 2010, with all New Jersey schools closing Thursday and Friday November 4th and 5th. While everyone from New Jersey does not visit Disney World, some do and it does noticeably increase crowds. Crowds are still low overall, but you will see a disproportionate amount of people visiting from the great state of New Jersey. We can just hope Snooki stays home

. It's just my forte and we're trained to be thorough. Overall, I think it's great. Very informative and presented quite well.
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HAHA, doh. I always do thatCafeen, you misspelled "January's" --
"In the weather section of the intro, add an apostrophe to "Janurarys""
Once a proofreader, always a proofreader.
ETA -- Just glanced through everything, didn't read it all. There are probably some others that I missed, but I just had to razz you about that one.
I figured the red squiggly line was for the no apostrophe, whoops! So um, yeah, do what she said not what I said
.To be fair, he was literally asking for it:Thank you for doing this post. I think it was very nice of you to put all this info together. You took the time to do it and I dont think it should be critiqued. It may not be up to publishing standards but was very informative.
Thanks again.
Maybe not exactly what he had in mind (I'm guessing it was more content-based corrections over coding-based corrections), but that's where my mind goes when asked to peruse a draft of a page/site. After 9 years in Web Development and QA, I look at things differently than others.I would appreciate any corrections or additional information that should be added.
). He has a very strong content-base in the page, adding a few usability and readability tweaks could make the entire page even better. I'd assume that he'd want the page (and, by extension, his site) to be the best that he can make it and these things are included in that. I'm sorry if I offended by suggesting that things could be made better, but that's the way it is. It doesn't mean what he has is bad at all, it just means that things can always be better. "Good enough" doesn't work with me on these things. Strong content is only as strong as the end-user's ability to read and digest the information and the vast majority of my suggestions were to aid in that manner directly.one of the coldest Januarys on record
In the weather section of the intro, add an apostrophe to "Janurarys"![]()

notfrostyjosh - thanks for all of the hard work you put into that.
The one thing that caught my eye was the January information. I was at WDW last January to run the marathon and I will be back in 2011 to run it again...