You implied that you are new to park planning, but I really like your planning style.
So many of us, myself included, place the rides in order from best to worst, but scattered all of the park. If you do it that way, you are running back and forth all over the park all day long.
This way, you have a clear consensus on your priorities, but can also see where the rides are. That way you can decide if you want to do that 2 attraction before a 1 attraction based on where you are in the park, and their proximity to other attractions you want to see.
I also like your timeline goals and food locations.
Great as a quick glance to-do card you can carry with you!
I may steal your idea. It feels a little less commando to me.