Wow this is a good book I am writing, I think you should at least try to read it

[gymnastgirlflips]

Maybe during break you'll have more time so we can all enjoy your book Hopefully you'll have more time in the near future. I love it so far!

 

[AmandaSparks730]

I'm soo mad

with exams coming I have no time to write, and my parents won't let me on the comp so I can't type it up yet

*sneaks you my laptop*

 

[CastawayJ]

I hate how short the chapters are tho

 

[AmandaSparks730]

One word:

DETAILS.

Details, details, details.

Teachers love 'em. And so do readers.

What you have is a good start; just add some more details, more descriptions.

 

[gymnastgirlflips]

Yeah, details are like 75% of a paper I write at school now. At least... its amazing how you start out with a simple sentence and then add like five adjetives, alliteration, and a metaphor along with some personafication to make it acceptable lol. Lots of rough drafts, that's for sure.

 

[CastawayJ]

so I know have 1.5 written chapters, but I need to type them up

they only take 6 pages in my huge notebook, but typed might only take 2 or 3 pages

I have my first exam friday, so no more dis/writing for a week

but I miss yall

 

[AmandaSparks730]

so I know have 1.5 written chapters, but I need to type them up

they only take 6 pages in my huge notebook, but typed might only take 2 or 3 pages

I have my first exam friday, so no more dis/writing for a week

but I miss yall

Miss you, too

GET ON AIM!