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I've decided that as long as my stories have a happy ending, they aren't nearly as depressing as they seem..

Peter hesitated briefly and gently put his hand in hers. Wendy’s heart leaped for the sky, and she massaged his hand softly. It was rougher, stronger than the last time she’d felt it. Her blue eyes filled with adoration as she turned to look at the once boy, now young man. For the first time since she couldn’t remember when, she felt like she could fly.
Did you write that?
 
i hate the group my teacher put me in english. it's completely obvious the only other girl in the group doesn't like me, and the guys in the group won't do a thing. i bet i'll end up doing most or all of the work.
 

Just read it...I feel better now lol. Still sad that they're breaking up. I hope I get to see them on their last tour.
 
i like the slower version better. i enjoy the screaming in the faster version, but something about this one makes it better.
 
Yeppers.
The story (well it's more like a vignette I guess) starts out with Wendy jumping off a cliff, but Peter flies in and rescues her and they go off to Neverland together forever.
'Cause I'm a hopeless romantic :rolleyes1:cloud9:
That was really good. You should publish it (:
 
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Aww thanks!
It's not that good overall, but I'm somewhat decent when it comes to imagery.

He stared at the pale moon’s reflection, glittering like pixie dust on the ocean.
 
Yes all 5 of us og members are on for the farewell tour. Tyson, Dj, Chad, Steve and Pouyan.
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Do you write often? Im gonna start writing soon. Maybe I'll start right now. Hmm I'll write about what goes on in my crazy over-active imagination. :D yusyusyus
 
I was reading something about writers hate writing.
Particularly true for me. Sometimes when I write I hate it, but when I finish, it's worth it.
Though sometimes I love writing. I guess it depends.

Aghhh. My hands are so dry. They've already bled a few times this month. My friends always ask who I got in a fight with because it looked like I used my fists to punch someone to death. They are so red and crack.
 
Here goes.

At 6:30 am the alarm began to buzz. He saw the beaming sunlight quickly spread throughout the room as he opened the window. He wandered towards the closet when he began to feel a strange pain on his head. Suddenly, he remembered of the battle that occured the night before just outside his home. At that moment his mind began to move quicker then a speeding bullet. His memory recovering. The battle began to replay in his mind. He remembered seeing bolt fighting a larger robot. He saw spark and shock engaging a well armed robot. He saw himself. Up in the air. Getting closer and closer to the enormous green robot. Then, a blue flash emerged from the robot's canon. He saw himself fall to the ground. Unconscious.

How's that?
 
Here goes.

At 6:30 am the alarm began to buzz. He saw the beaming sunlight quickly spread throughout the room as he opened the window. He wandered towards the closet when he began to feel a strange pain on his head. Suddenly, he remembered of the battle that occured the night before just outside his home. At that moment his mind began to move quicker then a speeding bullet. His memory recovering. The battle began to replay in his mind. He remembered seeing bolt fighting a larger robot. He saw spark and shock engaging a well armed robot. He saw himself. Up in the air. Getting closer and closer to the enormous green robot. Then, a blue flash emerged from the robot's canon. He saw himself fall to the ground. Unconscious.

How's that?

This is really good! Sounds like a really cool idea
 
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