poem

[loozianalooza00]

Peach flesh against a white wall
Pressing fully but won’t wane
Dig nails into the peeling paint
Drill knives at the plain pictures
Staring back at you like dull drones
Sitting blocks of nothingness dry, dead
Wall grinds and falls flat
Wistful glances at faded faults
I want to get out
But my head won’t allow it
~heide~

(im real into writing poetry so if yall could write be some feedback i'd really appreciate it i would!)

 

[fifi07]

I LIKE IT!!!!!!!

 

[FPgurl04]

that's so good!!! i love to write poetry too. all of mine r dumb though.

 

[TowerOfTerrorFreak]

me likey

 

[TinkerBellPixie4GOAL]

It's really good! I love writing poetry as well! I thin kI'm known for it actually because I'm the girl at school who carries around a binder full of my poetry and writing more in the back of geometry.