Distopia

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Intro

Welcome to the world of Distopia! Some of your favourite Disney characters will be featured here as well as many of dastardly villians from the wonderful world of Disney! Follow the adventures of many of the most famous Disney characters, including the famous duo of Mickey and Minnie and many others!
Hopefully I will continue this series (If I came come up with some ideas ;) )
Also, if you DIS'ers want to come up with characters of your own, feel free to! Just make a form including their name and a few descriptive words about them, example:

Name: Matt

Description: Tall, Thin, Tough

More coming soon, hopefully!:teeth:
 
Also, just so you know, I will use the Disney characters, but not the locations, I will make new land names up for my story. :)
Chapter 1 in progress :thumbsup2 !
 
The sun slowly ascended above the horizon, casting a magnificent gold color to the world below it. Along with the sun, a slight breeze blew throughout the land, lifting leaves up in the air and letting them slowly fall back to the ground. It was a perfect day.
Trees stood tall in the sky and fish and other sea creatures lazily lolled around the crystal clear ponds, causing ripples to form at the surface. Birds sang cheerful songs and glided around in the air gracefully.

"Ready to go, Pluto?" Mickey asked in his high, cheerful voice. As an answer to his question an overjoyed Pluto came bounding around the corner, into the kitchen and leaped onto Mickey, slobbering him until the Mouse was soaked.
"I'll take that as a yes," Mickey said, with a laugh. He walked into the next room with Pluto following alongside him.
"Umbrella, Hat, Chair, Lotion, Frisbee, I think we're ready to go!" He said with another laugh. Pluto scurried back into the kitchen and came out with a bone in his mouth.
"Okay, now we're ready to go," Chuckled Mickey, seeing Pluto's content face.

"Gosh, it looks perfect today," Sighed Mickey, setting up his chair on the white sand. Pluto nodded his head and stuck his tongue out in agreement.
The beach had already attracted many animals, some laying on the beach, while others splashing in the water.
"Mickey!" Shouted a number of voices. Mickey turned his head and waved as he saw Minnie, Donald, Goofy, and Daisy walking towards him.
"Gawrsh, it looks perfect today," Goofy said, looking around at the beach. Mickey laughed and answered:
"Now, where have I heard that before?"

Daisy and Minnie, chuckled to themselves as they watched Mickey, Donald, Goofy and Pluto jump around in the water, splashing each other. Pluto leaped over the crashing waves, while Mickey, Goofy and Donald tossed the frisbee around.

As the day wore on, the sun started to sink in the sky and darkness started to approach. The crowd started to fade away until only a few were left.
"I guess we should be going now," Said Mickey, calling to Pluto and starting to pack up.
"See you later, Mickey," Said Minnie as Donald and Goofy also came out from the water and started to get their things ready.
They waved goodbye as Mickey and Pluto made their way back to their home.
"What a great day," Mickey said, patting Pluto on the head as the dog barked an agreement.

The sky had turned a brilliant array of colors oncluding red, yellow and orange as only half of the sun was visible from above the horizon.
The sky turned to a dark blue as the sun was completey gone, getting ready for a new day.

:teeth: As you can probably see, I can't wait until I leave for Florida and it's beaches :teeth:

:thumbsup2
 
"What's that you have there?" Mickey asked, looking at a shiny object which Pluto dropped out of his mouth onto the white carpet. Mickey walked over to where the object lay and picked it up. It seemed to be a jewel of some kind. It was a brilliant red with perfectly cut edges. He turned it around in his hand and gasped when he saw a snake emblem carved into it. He ran his finger over the serpent beatifully carved. He held the diamond up to the sunlight streaming in through the window as it sparkled brilliantly.
"Where did you find it, Pluto?" Mickey questioned. Pluto barked an answer.
"The house?" Mickey asked. The dog shook his head.
"The beach?" The dog nodded happily.
"It could be anyone's...there was at least five hundred people there yesterday," Mickey sighed, falling back into his armchair and eyeing the object he held in his hand.
"Oh well," The mouse said, "It's a beautiful today, again. We may as well go over to see what Donald's doing," He said, getting up from his chair. "We'll worry about this later," He said, tossing the diamond on the wooden table in the middle of the room. He beckoned Pluto to follow as he cheerfully began to make his way over to his friend's house.
Long after the Mouse and Dog had left, a shadowy figure entered the room and walked over to the wooden table in the centre of the room.
"Now, what I have come for" A cold voice said as a clawed hand reached out and picked up the jewel resting on the table.
"At last, the world shall bow down to evil, once again!"
 

The door closed behind them as the Mouse and his companion walked into the house. Mickey walked over to the table and scratched his chin, he was sure he had put it on the table. He looked under and around but there was no sign of the little jewel at all, it's like it just sprouted legs and walked away.
"Oh well," He said, "I wouldn't have found out to who it belonged to, anyways," He sighed.
"What's this?" He asked himself as he inspected the door to the house and found five deep gashes on it, almost like a claw scraped it. He kneeled down and further looked at the scratches. He gasped, the thought occured to him that mabye someone had been in his house while he was gone. But...he calmed down, nothing was missing, atleast that he'd seen. Except...for the jewel, the diamond with a beatifully engraved snake on it. But why would anyone want to take a little thing like that? It didn't look that valuable, and surely, no one he knew was a theif near where he lived. But the thought stayed in his mind...What's so special about that jewel?

No one has any comments or critism? :sad:
 



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