could someone help??

[troone15]

i was hoping someone could rate these,, I wasnt sure how good they are,, im planning on giving them to somebody,, but i didnt want to tank it and have it blow up in my face.. maybe you guys could help..



We grew up together, but were never friends.
You always made fun.
I took it like you were nonexistent.
We grew up. . .
Finding we have the same ride.
You started liking me and I thought it was cool.
After awhile. . .I told your friend I couldn't live with out you.
I figured she told you,
Because you quit talking and you quit flirting.
It made me mad,
It made me sad.
I didn't know whether to scream or cry.
But every time I heard a certain song. . .
It makes me think of you.
What happened?
What did I do?
I really like to know
Because. . . I think I'm falling in love with you.

and then this one...

If I could buy the world
It would all go to you
If I could save the world
It would be for you
If I could talk to god
We would always talk about you
If I could be with you 24 hrs a day
that is what I would do
If I had to give my life
In heaven I would live for you
If I had to shed a few tears
Each tear would represent my love for you
If there was anything that I could possibly do
It would all be for you...

 

[nightmareb4xmas]

i gave both a 10...theyre very very awesome! it was so sweet and kind. i loved it! *tear*

 

[Tink3rb3ll]

I gave both a ten... very sweet. I especially liked the first one

 

[Daisymae26]

that was so sweet... i gave both of them a 10 also

 

[Florida_luvr924]

Very good! I'd like to write poetry, but I can never think of anything to write about that is deep. I gave them a ten!

 

[troone15]

ty,,im glad u guys like it,,