College Application Essay help

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I'm helping my cousin apply to one of the local colleges. He's very frustrated with the essay part and I was wondering if there was some sort of forum or web site that gives hints and hopefully examples for writing the college essay.

I think once he gets past the initial "Omg I don't know what to write" he'll be fine but it's hard getting him to that point.
 
This is a great question. My son is going to need this next year.

anyone?
 
DS is a HS junior, so we are beginning this process now. Here's what we've learned so far:
- write from the heart! college admissions officers can spot contrived essays
- don't reiterate your extra curricular activities - they are listed elsewhere on the app.
- This is the only opportunity that you have to let your personality be seen so use it wisely!
- Have lots of people read your rough and final drafts - parents, relatives, HS English teacher, guidance counselor, etc. Correct grammar, spelling, punctuation, etc.
Gather questions from the college you're applying to and see which is the best fit for you. Some sample questions: Write about a person who has had a significant influence on you. What are your personal goals upon completion of college? Write an essay that conveys a sense of who you are. Explain a time when you experienced a custom that was new to you. Topic of your choice.

DS has been studying martial arts for 12 years and will test for his 3rd degree black belt soon. He will probably try to center his essay around this - leadership skills, respect/influence of his instructor, teaching special needs children and adults, etc. Yes, this will appear on his ECs but he can go in-depth in his essay.

Try the website www.collegeconfidential.com - discussion forum. A lot of people on this site are applying to Ivies and other top-rated colleges, but you can still get some good info here. High school guidance counselors may also have sample essays to look at also.

Good luck!!
 
What's the essay question?

You have some great advice above. Most of all, be true to yourself. They read these things all the time. Something a little different or a little bit more heartfelt is always to his advatage.

Keep in mind that with admissions committess, they are reviewing you on paper. It is not you and they are not judging you. They've never met you, so it's impossible for them to fully "know" you. The essay is the chance for that to come across. But, at the same time, if it's a small envelope that comes and not the huge package, it is not HIM they have rejected. It's his paper resume they've decided hasn't fit what they need/are looking for.

I don't think I'm making any sense. Maybe someone else can give it a go.
 

Thanks for the advice. He's applying to a continuing ed program so the standard rules don't really apply for him. I'm his essay helper and I work at a college and am a student so I'm his advisee as well :thumbsup2

I'm basically looking for examples of essays to inspire him . He's got a bad case of writer's block and seems to do better when he has something to jump off from.
 


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