Caption help, please

[mrp4352]

I have a lovely picture of my good friend carrying her sleeping daughter out of the park. I want it for the last page of the scrapbook and something along the lines of: "A perfect trip turns every princess into a Sleeping Beauty" But I don't like the way it sounds. I'm not even exactly sure what I don't like about it - it's too wordy or something... Can you all help me find a better way of saying that?

TIA!!!!
Michelle

 

[Photobee]

I think it sounds good the way it is. But you could try changing the words around.

Every Princess turns into Sleeping Beauty at the end of a long day.

I would just play with the words at little more if you don't like the way it sounds! I think it sounds cute though! What a great play on words!

 

[AlexWyattMommy]

This is MY Sleeping Beauty

 

[mrp4352]

Photobee! That's it!!! I like the way that rolls better than my version!

AlexWyattMommy, thanks for the suggestion! My other three neices would get extremely jealous if they saw that about my best friend's daughter in my scrapbook, though!!

 

[Photobee]

I'm glad I could help, and that you found something you liked!

 

[AlexWyattMommy]

Photobee! That's it!!! I like the way that rolls better than my version!

AlexWyattMommy, thanks for the suggestion! My other three neices would get extremely jealous if they saw that about my best friend's daughter in my scrapbook, though!!

Yup, that could be bad.