lisaviolet
DIS Veteran
- Joined
- Jul 9, 2002
Well. I hate starting. But here I go.
At first I really struggled with the writing style. In that I felt that the abundance of description made it difficult, for me, to get hooked. But at some point all of that changed. I don't know whether something grabbed me or I got used to the style. Probably was the sex. Well, pre-rape scene I'm referring of course.
I don't know. It was something miniscule that really grabbed me. Briony's need for complete approval at work (before the onslaught of victims of war). I didn't think that she was the Briony of her youth. And without a lot of thought I judged that and the writing. As in the character had no continuity. Early on I thought, "What? I read Briony as an intense individual that bowed to no one and here she is reliant on the minute by minute reaction of someone else". And then suddenly it occured to me that the need for forgiveness and guilt could change anyone's character or core personality, couldn't it? It was a hit on the head that that is the novel in essence. That guilt can change everything for some people. And that the author was successful, smart, in cutting us off from Briony's years right after that night.
I obviously have more to say but I don't want to write a novel. So I'll leave it at that for now.
At first I really struggled with the writing style. In that I felt that the abundance of description made it difficult, for me, to get hooked. But at some point all of that changed. I don't know whether something grabbed me or I got used to the style. Probably was the sex. Well, pre-rape scene I'm referring of course.
I don't know. It was something miniscule that really grabbed me. Briony's need for complete approval at work (before the onslaught of victims of war). I didn't think that she was the Briony of her youth. And without a lot of thought I judged that and the writing. As in the character had no continuity. Early on I thought, "What? I read Briony as an intense individual that bowed to no one and here she is reliant on the minute by minute reaction of someone else". And then suddenly it occured to me that the need for forgiveness and guilt could change anyone's character or core personality, couldn't it? It was a hit on the head that that is the novel in essence. That guilt can change everything for some people. And that the author was successful, smart, in cutting us off from Briony's years right after that night.
I obviously have more to say but I don't want to write a novel. So I'll leave it at that for now.