The letter Im giving to DH on our anniversary about his present

[Disney8704]

Well this morning I made up a letter to give to my DH at Coral Reef during dinner on our anniversary. This letter describes what his anniversary present is from me. Please read it and let me know what you think. If you have any suggestions on making it better, do NOT hesitate to provide those ideas! The words in BOLD are gonna be in the walt disney script font. The rest is just gonna be in the Arial font.

STEVE,

ARE YOU READY FOR A WILD ADVENTURE?

TOMORROW MORNING WE WILL HEAD TO DISNEY'S ANIMAL KINGDOM!

WE WILL EXPERIENCE AN UNFORGETTABLE JOURNEY ON THE BACKSTAGE SAFARI!

SO GET A GOOD NIGHT'S REST AND BE SURE TO WEAR COMFY SHOES!

OUR JOURNEY BEGINS AT 8:30 AM!





WHAT IS THIS BACKSTAGE SAFARI I SPEAK OF?

Go behind the scenes at Disney's Animal Kingdom!

Find out what happens behind-the-scenes at Animal Kingdom. You'll get an insider's look at the innovative ways that we are meeting challenges in areas such as conservation, animal nutrition and medicine, animal care and behavioral studies. Highlights include visits to: backstage animal housing areas to meet some of our keepers and learn how we care for our animals on a daily basis; the Animal Nutrition Center, where all of our animal's diets are prepared; our state-of-the-art Veterinary Hospital and Animal Programs Administration to learn how we are constantly seeking new ways to ensure our animal's health and well being. This program takes place entirely behind the scenes. Plus, who knows what other surprises we might encounter on this tour!

 

[AlexWyattMommy]

The word "TO" at the beginning of the fourth line feels like it is a continuation of the third line. Would it make it too long if you put "WE WILL" instead?

Can I go with you?
It sounds like a wonderful gift full of memories to happen.

 

[party of 3]

i love it! it sounds like so much fun!!!! i'd love to do that.
can i just say one thing??? so get a good night's rest and be sure to wear comfy shoes.
really i'd love to be doing this. what a present!!!!

 

[Disney8704]

Oops!! Glad you caught that!!! Me and my poor spelling - ugh!

i love it! it sounds like so much fun!!!! i'd love to do that.
can i just say one thing??? so get a good night's rest and be sure to wear comfy shoes.
really i'd love to be doing this. what a present!!!!

 

[Disney8704]

Thanks for the suggestion. I knew TO didnt sound right and couldnt think of what to put there, but you answered that problem!

Sure you can come with us. As long as your there on Aug 8th and can fork out the $

The word "TO" at the beginning of the fourth line feels like it is a continuation of the third line. Would it make it too long if you put "WE WILL" instead?

Can I go with you?
It sounds like a wonderful gift full of memories to happen.

 

[AlexWyattMommy]

Ugh! I'll be 10 days late. I would totally fork out the money for that experience.

 

[Disney8704]

If you wanna do it, all you have to do is call WDW Tours. The number is 407-WDW-TOUR. It's $70 per person. They offer AP, DVC, AAA (with Diamond Card) and Disney Visa discounts. For me and DH it was $119 with AAA discount. Everyone in your party has to be at least 16 yrs old. They only do it on Mondays, Wednesdays, Thursdays, and Fridays 8:30am and 1pm. It is also 3 hrs long.

Ugh! I'll be 10 days late. I would totally fork out the money for that experience.

 

[StitchIsOurHero]

Ooh, this sounds like so much fun!! I want to do this at some point. . .no sneaking down there August 8th, since that's my due date!

I hope you all have a WONDERFUL time!!

 

[Disney8704]

Congrats! What are you having?

Ooh, this sounds like so much fun!! I want to do this at some point. . .no sneaking down there August 8th, since that's my due date!

I hope you all have a WONDERFUL time!!

 

[party of 3]

Ooh, this sounds like so much fun!! I want to do this at some point. . .no sneaking down there August 8th, since that's my due date!

I hope you all have a WONDERFUL time!!

you will not be sneaking anywhere at that stage!!!!!!

 

[AlexWyattMommy]

Congrats! What are you having?

I love this question. When I was pregnant, I always wanted to answer "A litter of puppies."

She is having a boy, according to the ultrasounds. It'll be beautiful, I've seen pics of her and her DH.

 

[party of 3]

I love this question. When I was pregnant, I always wanted to answer "A litter of puppies.".

you are a pistol!!!! a little of puppies!!!!!!

 

[StitchIsOurHero]

I love this question. When I was pregnant, I always wanted to answer "A litter of puppies."

She is having a boy, according to the ultrasounds. It'll be beautiful, I've seen pics of her and her DH.

Hmmm. . . maybe a litter of puppies is why I'm this size!! Perhaps there are 15 in there!! I think from the ultrasounds (the 3-D) that he looks like a mix of both of us (bless his heart. . .he has no shot at having any hair!!!)

Disney8704--thanks for asking! Like AWM said, we are having a boy. He is quite open in the ultrasounds about showing us that he is a boy!!

po3--I can't sneak anywhere NOW. . .if he hasn't come by August 8th, I can't imagine how it'll be then!!