Short Blues Song...Help

[Lewski709]

I want to win tickets for my parents for Christmas and in order to do so, need to write a short Blues Song. I've tried for over a week. I stink! I can write poems pretty well, but as soon as I start with the Blues singing...it just doesn't work. It can be about ANYTHING.

I'd buy these tickets for them if I could, but they are sold out.

HELP ME WIN!

 

[crcormier]

I want to win tickets for my parents for Christmas and in order to do so, need to write a short Blues Song. I've tried for over a week. I stink! I can write poems pretty well, but as soon as I start with the Blues singing...it just doesn't work. It can be about ANYTHING.

I'd buy these tickets for them if I could, but they are sold out.

HELP ME WIN!

Here's my attempt, just a generic blues riff (like Heartbreak Hotel.) Good luck!

The concert, it's sold out now...
The scalpers, cost too much...
My folks need tickets for Christmas...
But there just ain't none to be touched...

I got no tickets for Christmas
And I ain't got no clues...
For my folks so hard to shop for
It's the sold out, can't go Bluuuuesss....

I'd get a Mazarati...
But it won't fit under the tree...
and the yacht that sits in the harbor...
Just floated out to sea...

I got no tickets for Christmas
The malls all look like zoos...
Without a parking spot there
It's the sold out, can't go Bluuuuesss....

So please, please help me out now
I wearing out my shoes...
From pacing up and down the street
Cause I don't know what to choose...

I need some tickets for Christmas
How I have paid my duuuessss...
Can't get another fruitcake
It's the sold out, can't go Bluuuuesss....

 

[The Mystery Machine]

Wowee...you are good!

 

[crcormier]

Bumping to get some other people to help.

 

[MzDiz]

Honestly, I can hear this in my head. I'm going to end up singing it all night.

I got this feelin' that you leavin'
I got this feelin' that you goin'
I got this feelin' that you leavin'
I just can't make my woman outta you

I can tell by your kiss
And I can tell by your touch
And I can tell by the way you tell me
"It's all right big daddy"

And babe you're leavin
Babe you're leavin me alone
Cuz I just can't make my woman outta you

Where you goin' pretty mama
Where you goin' pretty baby
Where you goin pretty mama
You just can't leave me like you do

And babe you're leavin
Babe you're leavin me alone
Cuz I just can't make my woman outta you

You got that step to your walk
You got that look in your eye
You got that hurtin' in your talk
Tells me I'm gon' cry tonight

And babe you're leavin
Babe you're leavin me alone
Cuz I just can't make my woman outta you


That was fun! I should get in touch with my inner old black man more often. Hehe, big daddy... I kill me.