Poetry....

[DizFan101]

Hello,
I haven't seen any posts bout poetry...So therefore I'm creating one. .

I want to share my poem/poetry here that I just wrote like last week on how I was feeling and continue to feel and bout a life event that changed me. It doesn't have a title yet because I don't know what to call it. Please tell me how you like the poem. If you also write poetry please feel free to share..

If you see the world through my eyes what would you see?
Would the world be as beautiful as you believed it to be?
If you saw through my eyes and looked around
You would probably see the cold hard ground

My life was turned upside down
my smile turned into a frown
My Life was once great but I don't quite remember
because of an event that happened in September

Everything happened because of just one lie
Some days I just want to curl up and die
On the outside I seem to be doing okay
But on the inside I feel empty and astray

I feel that nobody truly knows what I went through
Because nobody wanted to hear what I said was true
Although I have family, I feel quite alone
I really hate not knowing the great unknown
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[HappyFingers]

ok firstly your poem was fine and passionate although i suspect its unfinished and thats why you havnt been able to find a title for it ? just guessing

hope you feel better soon

heres a poem i wrote 20 years ago

enjoy

I will Deposit - He will withdraw​

Poetry is but perfection
A mathamatical amount
Life is but a reflection
Of the Grace in you account

With surrender you will realise
That God is all around
Then youll start to make deposits
In the Bank that you have found

You just rely on your Spirit
And forget to use your Mind
You help your Brother constantly
With no Judgement of any kind

Perception rises constantly
When you look on Life like this
You fall in Love with Spirit
Be sure the mind you will not miss

Your Brother must be helped
To see his simple sinless beauty
Not only will you enjoy it
But youll realise its your Duty

At first it feels confusing
But youll soon learn not to Fear it
For I am not a body God
I tell you im a Spirit

Poetry and Life
Different words but mean the same
Your world is an Illusion
Its your life but its a Game

To the unlearned these words are Harsh
They may seem to be quiet Mean
Wake up my Sleeping Brother
Youve been sucked in by a Dream

So Prayer Service and Practice
Is what you use to bring down the Fire
From our Holy Lord the Father
Who will Burn up your Desire

So Tell me God what is the cure
For the Consequences that we Reap
He Looked on me with Omnipresence
Said Son its simply what you Eat

Food For Thought​

wow that takes me back to another time

 

[HappyFingers]

yup 20 years ago Energy running up my spine

Illusions​

The World that you Promised God
I simply cannot See
Is this because of you God
Or is this because of Me

Your World is Bright and Perfect
With a Mistake not to be found
My World is Dull and Boring
With emptiness and Sadness all around

To Fight you is a Failure
Though i gave it my Best Shot
So take our Life and Make it Better
I should be Happy But im Not

To Comprehend of you with Mind
I only get Confused
You say that im your Son
But God i Feel ive been Abused

You Abandon me on the Earth
I get to 20 of Life a Fraction
You Tell me of your Perfect World
And the Consequences of My Action

You say you will Forgive Me
Stay by my side and be my Mate
I look over my Shoulder God
And I tell you its to Late

All the Hurt that has been had
The People that have been Pained
How is there a cure for me God
With the Mind already Stained

Now the Action may of changed
But the Mind it still can Picture
All the actions of the Past
God im so Angry I could hit Ya

And as i wait for you to Lift Me up
With my feelings Poetically Penned
I can just Live another day God
Go to Sleep and then Wake up again

Dont know if ive surrended
And are Aspiring to you
I just wake up Now and Face the Day
God what More can I Do

Memories​

wo, wow, cowabunga, that was tough to relive

like i said i wrote these 20 years ago

my point

dont matter what your feeling or whats happening in your life

suck it up princess and keep walking

Life Goes on

I hope in some way ive helped

cheers

 

[DizFan101]

I have many other poems but I can't seem to find my book.
It got misplaced when we put in the new rugs. Argh. I had a lot of poems and some poems.