newsletter help

[Broghantaylor]

this is our newsletter so far yes there are errors like spelling and such but i want to see what else i can add or what i don't need you know also i wanted to share my save the dates

ok the newsletter
please share any ideas

 

[FlamingoAllie]

I love your STD and your newsletter is so much fun! It has all the important info, plus I love the fun little facts that you included too. Very personalized. Your guests are going to LOVE them!!

 

[Broghantaylor]

thanks Allie any thought one what else i could add or what should i leave out?

 

[iluvasoldier]

I think it is perfect! If you want I posted both of my newsletters in my PJ. One I sent out before the invitations and one I sent with the invitations. Since many of our guest will be traveling I put a lot of information about things to do in Orlando. I kept the basic white background to save on printing cost but printed in color for the pictures to pop. Do make sure you check spelling and capitalization before you print. There are also a few sentence structure mistakes and spacing mistakes within sentences but that all is easily fixed.

Great job!

 

[Broghantaylor]

thanks

 

[CherylLynn]

First of all, CONGRATULATIONS!!!!! And your Wedding Day will be on my Birthday! June 29 is a great day! I'm sure I will be in Disney that day so I may come stalk out your Wedding to catch a peek!
Your newsletter is fantastic! You are doing a great job, and good for you for getting things ready ahead of schedule. Since you asked for edits, I'll offer those that I see.

1st page, capitalize 'The' in the title. In the paragraph "Disney Fairy Tale Wedding", add an exclaimation point after 'happening' and capitalize 'Tale'. The sentences should read, "A Disney Fairy Tale Wedding is a dream come true! I mean, Disney is 'us'- it's how we met and what we love!"
On the 2nd page in the GF info fix the spacing. Also, the spacing between lines is uneven in the Resort listings.
The 3rd page has no punctuation- add the neccessary periods and such.

I hope I don't sound like a nut, or too overbearing. I know that as I made all our stationary and such I needed them to be viewed with fresh eyes. Sometimes when you look at something day in and day out for days you overlook misspellings and grammer errors.

You have done a terrific job and should be very proud! Again, congratulations!!!

 

[Broghantaylor]

you are more then welcome to come stalk the wedding lol
and thanks for the input