My son....the next sci fi/horror writer of the century!!!

6_Time_Momma

<font color=blue>Still crazy after all these years
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I hope he can support me in my old age!!! He has a lot of talent in his warped and twisted mind!!! I wish he would actually finish one of his stories!!!!



"Prolouge

The year is 3025. Only a few animal species remain, and a small number of humans take up the positions of intelligent beings. What ever living creatures remain, live in fear and paranoia. A small crack of a twig in the forest, and the small amount of timid animals that dwell there scurry away in fear. Footsteps on the shattered and ruined pavement, and any humans rush away, and lock themselves in their homes pointlessly.
Although, there are strange, distorted, nameless... monsters, some would call them, whom do not live in fear. They simply cause it, crave it. About 1 millennia ago, around the no longer existing continent of Antarctica, slowly over time, as one remaining scientist had put it, odd markings started appearing, making a total of ten after exactly 10 years. One by one, they started to glow a bright green, making them more noticeable, attracting many researchers, and tourists. But only 1 year after all of them had reached their brightest, the rocks seemed to shake, then, explode. The symbols disappeared all at once, and these monsters had shown them selves after 12 years of waiting. They quickly disposed of the researchers, but one who had managed to escape, told his story and was thought crazy.
That scientist was locked away, left to his own thoughts, tortured by the memories. Only a week had passed, with nothing on his mind to dwell on but that day. The man had gone mad, and it didn’t help when he had to relive that day, making it his last. The creatures seem to come through the walls, all ten of them, eerie and mist in their wake, they floated, if you will call it that, over to the insane victim. One stepped forward, and lifted one transparent arm, atleast it seemed, and placed his hand on the survivors head. The man howled like a wolf at a moon, not in pain, not in fright, out of sheer instinct, yelling for help that would never come. After a long moment, the creatures arm passed through the man, and he fell without a sound, and landed softly on the cushioned ground, his body being dissolved, all while he was alive.
These Horrific beings drifted through the wall once more, leaving the poor suffering man twitching in pain, who was soon gone completly. The creatures lurked ever onward, to any life they could find, plant life burning in their path, storms blowing behind them. Throughout the years, the humans obeyed these creatures, knowing the power they possessed. Even after all the murders and torturing the monsters put humans through, having them as slaves, brutily giving the horrid death only after a small while, humans still obeyed.
After 5 centuries had past, nearly more than ¾ the worlds population had been demolished, taken abruptly away by the monstrosities, known as Xengorls, meaning death in thier langauge, the only word humans had heard them speak, right before the claimed another life. A small group only 20 people finnaly realized, that they had nothing to lose. They started gathering more survivors, trying to create technology with what little they had, learning the weaknesses of the Xengorls. Many had died , bringing little by little, being punished for their actions by the undying invaders. "
 
Why wait? Have him write a complete story. Maybe he can support you now, lol!!!

Very cool. I'd also like to hear the rest.
 
:) Does he watch the X-files, Kristy?? :p
Perhaps you have the next generation's Stephen King in the makings ;)
How old is he..? I enjoyed reading this.
 
Very well done, he's only about 11 isn't he? His written vocabulary is great, my 11yo DD is in the accelerated program but her written work isn't nearly as complex.
 

He's really a wizard ya know;)

Good job, Bradley! I'd buy the book:D
 














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