Invitations Wording

[Laurafoster]

Im having some problems sorting out my wording for my invitations. Here is what i have so far.....

In the spirit of the magic
that brought us together,
We

Laura Rachel Foster
and
Gary David Flower

Invite you to join us for our fairytale wedding
The beginning our our happily ever after.

On Tuesday the 5th December
In the year two thousand and Six
at 3 o'clock in the afternoon.

At Disney's Yacht Club Gazebo.


Not sure if it looks/sounds right?
Also my family want me to include a mention of the reception on there but im not sure how to word that either? Its going to be at the Boardwalk resort.

Any help would be great?!

 

[Minnie1156]

Sounds good to me. Maybe you could add "Please come help us make it a magical celebration".

 

[KT27]

Laura,

We did basically the same wording but then had 2 seperate cards for The Reception and Dessert Party and an RSVP card that read:

We would be honored by your presence
At our Fairytale Wedding
Please RSVP by March 15, 2006
M______________________________________
______ Sorry, unable to attend.
______ We will be attending.
Number Attending : Adults _____ Children ______

Here is a pic of our invite with the seperate cards:

 

[JDMasso]

I think it sounds perfect!! In regards to the reception, maybe you can add the following:

"To help us celebrate this magical event, please join us for the reception, immediately following the ceremony, at ______________"

Or, maybe, you can keep it simpler, like this;

"The reception immediately following the ceremony at _____________"

In any case, what you have already is perfect. I personally would include something about the reception. But I’ve also seen invitations that do not mention the reception.

Hope this helps.

 

[ead79]

That is really pretty wording! There are only a couple of things that I noticed that you might want to change. On the lines with the date, I think it should read

Tuesday, the Fifth of December
Two Thousand Six

Then I don’t think you need the word “At” before Disney’s Yacht Club Gazebo.