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Old 10-09-2006, 09:42 PM   #1
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Hacking the System (Story) *Part 8 Up!*

I have decided to post my short story that I had to write for my English class. It revolves around VMK after hours and hackers.

Part 1:

“I’m so close to finishing this! I can’t stop now!” a man nervously mumbled as he glanced at the clock on his computer screen.

“You have to. It’s almost midnight and it will be closing for the night. We can resume this tomorrow where we left off,” another guy said from the shadows.

“But, I’m so close to finishing it, though. I can’t quit now.”

“You’re going to have to quit.”

“But-“

“NOW!”

“Yes, sir.”

**********

“Taylor, get off, now! You’re up way past your bed time,” a woman screamed from down the stairs.

“Can’t I stay on until closing? Please?” Taylor said from his room.

“Fine, but after that, it’s time for bed.”

Taylor grinned as he turned back to his computer screen. He would get to stay on VMK for the first time until closing. As a sort of custom, VMKer’s would gather in a room and line up and start to dance. The most famous room would be the Castle Forecourt with the statue of Walt and Mickey in the middle of it.

“This is so cool. I’ve never been in a closing line before,” Taylor’s character, FantaStitch, said, as a speech bubble appeared over the character’s head.

“Are you serious?” a speech bubble said above a girl character.

“Yeah, I’m never on this late at night.”

Then, the screen became slightly opaque as a box appeared that said the VMK would be closed for the night and would be open tomorrow starting at 7:00 A.M.

“Good night!”


I will post Part 2 if I can get...let's say...10 comments.

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Old 10-09-2006, 09:47 PM   #2
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Old 10-09-2006, 09:49 PM   #3
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For a second i htought Nano started this thread LOL
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Old 10-09-2006, 09:51 PM   #4
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Sounds nice, if I could ever remember my ideas, I would do something like this.
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Old 10-09-2006, 09:52 PM   #5
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You actually like it? Cool.

Oh, and should I mention it's a story in the title?
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Old 10-09-2006, 09:53 PM   #6
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You actually like it? Cool.

Oh, and should I mention it's a story in the title?
1. YES we love it

2. Maybe Lol
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Old 10-09-2006, 09:55 PM   #7
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Okay, added it was a story.

Just seven more comments.
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Old 10-09-2006, 10:09 PM   #8
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I see that people are reading this. If you like it, say so. If you don't, say so. I don't care.
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Old 10-09-2006, 10:11 PM   #9
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hey i will just call you super star.. only cause i dont remember your name..
 
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wow that is greaT!
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Old 10-09-2006, 10:12 PM   #10
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Old 10-09-2006, 10:12 PM   #11
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ok next story please please!
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Old 10-09-2006, 10:17 PM   #12
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This sounds really good.
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Old 10-09-2006, 10:17 PM   #13
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It's great! Please keep writing!
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Old 10-09-2006, 10:38 PM   #14
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More more more! I got really mad you didn't write more!
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Old 10-10-2006, 06:29 AM   #15
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i lvoe it, please next story
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