Could i get some feedback? [Archive] - The DIS Discussion Forums

Blumonkeyboy

07-31-2011, 01:09 AM

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qI-MvSHu7p8&feature=channel_video_title
I mostly improvised this.

Stitch4Prez

07-31-2011, 01:15 AM

The "yes it is" at 2:52 was awesome.

Blumonkeyboy

07-31-2011, 11:50 AM

Thanks lol
anyone else?

aherzog

07-31-2011, 12:21 PM

Cool i like it

charliebrown

07-31-2011, 12:24 PM

Good
Back up signing, and harmonies
Relateable

Bad- you got of beat a bit
Rhyme scheme changed 7 times....