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ThePurpleMorphy
10-08-2008, 06:36 AM
Have you written a song you would like to share with us? No "music" necessary, just the words :p.

I let my more "happy romantic" side out in songs :p. This is very unusual for me.

-from- Ended Up Together by "morph"
---
For someone that I thought would be
Just another pain to me
You never run away
I could stay with you all of my days

Never thought you'd be my friend
One who'd really understand
You're always by my side
From you I know I will never hide

-chorus-

Looks like we ended up together
Never thought we'd do it
Knew that we just couldn't
Now I can't belive I thought we wouldn't

Somehow we ended up together
Through our stormy sorrows
We found a bright tommrow
Never again will we bow down

Even though we both knew better
We still ended up together!
---
That's all folks!
Cheesy, right?
Don't let me be the only one!

JulielovesDisney
10-08-2008, 07:55 AM
I can't write songs or poetry. I guess that creative part of my brain never developed properly or something. I just can't form them. lol
If if I do write a song/poetry, it comes out so elementary school..like "The cat/has a hat/this hat is blue/and the cat likes to chew. :lmao:

I love reading everyone else's though! I really like that song your wrote, ThePurpleMorphy! It's cuute!!

NeverLand<3
10-08-2008, 08:39 AM
no one can see
the candle burnin inside of me
its burnin deep in me
no one can hide
the secrets that i hide
no one can see that its real
oh. and the pain is killin me and the burden is
unbearable

but when the load is too heavy
i just give up
i go my own way
but next to me You stay

ooooooooh, next to me You stay, oh next to me You stay

and You say.....

when the load gets too heavy
dont just give up
dont go your own way
cause next to you I'll stay

ooooooooh, next to you I'll stay


its about God and my relationship with Him. so tell me if you dont like it. tell me some suggestions too

Tinkerbell94
10-08-2008, 02:25 PM
no one can see
the candle burnin inside of me
its burnin deep in me
no one can hide
the secrets that i hide
no one can see that its real
oh. and the pain is killin me and the burden is
unbearable

but when the load is too heavy
i just give up
i go my own way
but next to me You stay

ooooooooh, next to me You stay, oh next to me You stay

and You say.....

when the load gets too heavy
dont just give up
dont go your own way
cause next to you I'll stay

ooooooooh, next to you I'll stay


its about God and my relationship with Him. so tell me if you dont like it. tell me some suggestions too


Thats pretty good :goodvibes

disneychick2721
10-08-2008, 02:27 PM
I've written a lot of songs.
I dont have the patience to type them all though.
xD
I've written one about my pals on the Jonas Thread. :grouphug:
But yeah if anyones that interested PM me ?
Im a nerd I know.
:P

Tinkerbell94
10-08-2008, 02:38 PM
LOL! Yeah I've writtin some songs too but they're cheesy! I will type one if you want me to but seriously, they're bad(as in not good, cheesy)...lol:goodvibes

disneychick2721
10-08-2008, 02:58 PM
LOL! Yeah I've writtin some songs too but they're cheesy! I will type one if you want me to but seriously, they're bad(as in not good, cheesy)...lol:goodvibes

Im sure there not cheesy.
:P
When I start writing one Im like oh, no that sounds stupid, But I've learned you can doubt yourself.

I like the song you typed before BTW.
(:

inlalaland
10-08-2008, 03:36 PM
These are really good! :goodvibes I write songs sometimes but I'd never be brave enough to post it here, haha.

I've written a lot of songs.
I dont have the patience to type them all though.
xD
I've written one about my pals on the Jonas Thread. :grouphug:
But yeah if anyones that interested PM me ?
Im a nerd I know.
:P

It's a very beautiful song Kara. :teeth: :grouphug:

disneychick2721
10-08-2008, 03:58 PM
These are really good! :goodvibes I write songs sometimes but I'd never be brave enough to post it here, haha.



It's a very beautiful song Kara. :teeth: :grouphug:

Come on Els !
I want to read em'.
xD


Ha Thanks.
:P

ThePurpleMorphy
10-08-2008, 04:49 PM
I can't write songs or poetry. I guess that creative part of my brain never developed properly or something. I just can't form them. lol
If if I do write a song/poetry, it comes out so elementary school..like "The cat/has a hat/this hat is blue/and the cat likes to chew. :lmao:

I love reading everyone else's though! I really like that song your wrote, ThePurpleMorphy! It's cuute!!

LOL I know right?

Thanks!

wdwllamadancer
10-08-2008, 07:00 PM
I can't write songs or poetry. I guess that creative part of my brain never developed properly or something. I just can't form them. lol
If if I do write a song/poetry, it comes out so elementary school..like "The cat/has a hat/this hat is blue/and the cat likes to chew. :lmao:

I love reading everyone else's though! I really like that song your wrote, ThePurpleMorphy! It's cuute!!

i suffer from the exact same thing :D

Tinkerbell94
10-08-2008, 07:04 PM
Im sure there not cheesy.
:P
When I start writing one Im like oh, no that sounds stupid, But I've learned you can doubt yourself.

I like the song you typed before BTW.
(:


thanks but I havn't typed one yet,:goodvibes that was some one else... but I do agree i liked it too. :):goodvibes

3mtn-kate
10-08-2008, 07:52 PM
*this is just a little parts of it i'm not done, no one's ever read these before none of these are done*

This time
This one sweet time
Iíve fallen so hard
Why didnít you catch me?
Before I hit the ground
You were never there
You didnít care at all about how hard I fell against the cold
The Darkness of my sadness.
Iím stumbling through my head
Not knowing where to go
You are a maze I will never escape

But then again
Would I ever want to?

My life
Has always been my life
But then you come along and
Ruin everything
Everything I ever wanted
Everything I ever worked for
You
You took from me


This is how I know
That you are nothing to me anymore
Seeing her face light up, her eyes fill with happiness
And knowing that you put it there
She is so amazing for you better than I ever was
You are so wonderful and understand my lowest lows
But you know how much you love her so
And I can live with that
I might even be happy for the first time
In such a long long time
There is no way you can make her as happy as you made me
But I love you for trying
So just go
Go be hers
Make her happy
you want to anyway
Donít worry about me
Iíll be fine I got my own life now
You much know how much you did to me
How much hope you let me keep but then you set me free


To wear my heart
My walls so high my heart slammed shut
You broke me
Solid ground below me arms to hold me
Iím broken at my core
Shaken by you once more
How could I let myself believe you would be there still?
Holding onto a hopeless cause that you always will love me all over again

cdog12
10-08-2008, 10:20 PM
Thats pretty good :goodvibes
they aight
*this is just a little parts of it i'm not done, no one's ever read these before none of these are done*

This time
This one sweet time
Iíve fallen so hard
Why didnít you catch me?
Before I hit the ground
You were never there
You didnít care at all about how hard I fell against the cold
The Darkness of my sadness.
Iím stumbling through my head
Not knowing where to go
You are a maze I will never escape

But then again
Would I ever want to?

My life
Has always been my life
But then you come along and
Ruin everything
Everything I ever wanted
Everything I ever worked for
You
You took from me


This is how I know
That you are nothing to me anymore
Seeing her face light up, her eyes fill with happiness
And knowing that you put it there
She is so amazing for you better than I ever was
You are so wonderful and understand my lowest lows
But you know how much you love her so
And I can live with that
I might even be happy for the first time
In such a long long time
There is no way you can make her as happy as you made me
But I love you for trying
So just go
Go be hers
Make her happy
you want to anyway
Donít worry about me
Iíll be fine I got my own life now
You much know how much you did to me
How much hope you let me keep but then you set me free


To wear my heart
My walls so high my heart slammed shut
You broke me
Solid ground below me arms to hold me
Iím broken at my core
Shaken by you once more
How could I let myself believe you would be there still?
Holding onto a hopeless cause that you always will love me all over again

not bad but you over poetic of the passon of the love that is altercating the big dissent just fabricate the situation like maybe some of a pauper

like the song pol na pol

hmm let me do a snippet as someone have stolen mine

I kissed Mss jaco o

lanter no i don't even know it's name

it was so scay not even tried
but now i have a little fright\

i am too nervous

ThePurpleMorphy
10-10-2008, 05:56 PM
these are all so cute! :cutie:

disneychick2721
10-10-2008, 05:59 PM
thanks but I havn't typed one yet,:goodvibes that was some one else... but I do agree i liked it too. :):goodvibes

Hahaahaha.
Woooow.
I totally didnt notice the quote box around that.
Dude wow.
Im stupid.
:rotfl:

Tinkerbell94
10-10-2008, 06:40 PM
naw, i had a good laugh about it so its fine!:goodvibes

disneychick2721
10-10-2008, 06:42 PM
naw, i had a good laugh about it so its fine!:goodvibes

Lol.
Awesome.
xD

NeverLand<3
10-11-2008, 01:33 PM
*this is just a little parts of it i'm not done, no one's ever read these before none of these are done*

This time
This one sweet time
Iíve fallen so hard
Why didnít you catch me?
Before I hit the ground
You were never there
You didnít care at all about how hard I fell against the cold
The Darkness of my sadness.
Iím stumbling through my head
Not knowing where to go
You are a maze I will never escape

But then again
Would I ever want to?

My life
Has always been my life
But then you come along and
Ruin everything
Everything I ever wanted
Everything I ever worked for
You
You took from me


This is how I know
That you are nothing to me anymore
Seeing her face light up, her eyes fill with happiness
And knowing that you put it there
She is so amazing for you better than I ever was
You are so wonderful and understand my lowest lows
But you know how much you love her so
And I can live with that
I might even be happy for the first time
In such a long long time
There is no way you can make her as happy as you made me
But I love you for trying
So just go
Go be hers
Make her happy
you want to anyway
Donít worry about me
Iíll be fine I got my own life now
You much know how much you did to me
How much hope you let me keep but then you set me free


To wear my heart
My walls so high my heart slammed shut
You broke me
Solid ground below me arms to hold me
Iím broken at my core
Shaken by you once more
How could I let myself believe you would be there still?
Holding onto a hopeless cause that you always will love me all over again



i love that! i always wonder how lines like that come to people. my songs sound like a bunch of different song lines that i remember from the back of my head. lol:laughing:

3mtn-kate
10-11-2008, 02:37 PM
i love that! i always wonder how lines like that come to people. my songs sound like a bunch of different song lines that i remember from the back of my head. lol:laughing:

thanks :goodvibes

cdog12
10-12-2008, 02:03 AM
we are 2 in million
we got all the luck we could be given
if the world should stop,we still have each other
and no matter what we forever as one

a little something :)

ThePurpleMorphy
10-12-2008, 10:30 AM
we are 2 in million
we got all the luck we could be given
if the world should stop,we still have each other
and no matter what we forever as one

a little something :)

Aww, cute! Do you have more?