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GoofySon'sMom
05-19-2008, 02:32 PM
My DS12 had to write a poem about something special to him. I really like the poem and wanted to share it with fellow Diser's that understand our obsession!

Main Street USA

People Walk by
the Busy Shops
On Main Street USA

Cinderella's Castle
Towers over the Crowd of People
On Main Street USA

I hear Horses's Hooves
Slap the Pavement
On Main Street USA

I Smell the Baked Goods
from the Bakery
On Main Street USA

I Feel the August Breeze
Patter against my Shirt
On Main Street USA

The bright Florida Sun
Hits my Face
On Main Street USA

The Trains Pulls into the Station
With a Loud Howl
On Main Street USA

The Music Flutters
Across the Air
On Main Street USA

My Mother, Father
And me, Walk out of the Gate
On Main Street USA

ryley26
05-19-2008, 02:51 PM
Yes brings great memories to mind. Thank your DS for me can't wait till July.:thumbsup2

Steven41782
05-19-2008, 02:52 PM
Awesome...it's a sensory poem, no?

Great for 12.

Diznotyzed
05-19-2008, 02:55 PM
Lovely! That transported me right there!

GoofySon'sMom
05-19-2008, 03:08 PM
Lovely! That transported me right there!


Me, too!

DS is here and he wanted me to thank you all for the kind words.

To Diznotyzed ... that is exactly what he was going for. He is thrilled that you 'got it'.

To: Steven41782 ... the assignment was only to write in some form about something meaningful to you. DS chose to do a poem and just did it using the senses. I am such a proud Mom right now!

Steven41782
05-19-2008, 03:16 PM
Sweet. I like he horses hooves line the best.

JulielovesDisney
05-19-2008, 03:21 PM
Your son has talent! It's such a good poem! You should be very, very proud. :teeth:

GoofySon'sMom
05-19-2008, 03:26 PM
Your son has talent! It's such a good poem! You should be very, very proud. :teeth:


Thank you! To the best of my knowledge, this is the first real poem he has ever written. For some reason he was hesitant about me reading it. Then he decided that I only said it was good because I am "Mom". Now he has seen the responses here and is very, very happy. :lovestruc

Princesskeyblade
05-19-2008, 03:28 PM
Your DS has an amazing writing talent.

Tell him Awesome Job for me!

Becky521
05-19-2008, 07:21 PM
What a great poem! :thumbsup2 You really can picture Main St. when you read it.