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CutieEm
04-12-2008, 10:58 AM
Well, some of you may know that April is Poetry Month. So I am going to have a contest to see who can make the best poem. And the prize is...

Gold Ears!!

So you can make your poem and post it here, and I will decide the winner on the last day of April, I think that is April 30th..?

Good Luck!
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Well, as today being May 2nd, I have made my final decision. I am so impressed with all the poems everyone has written! They were FANTASTIC!

As them being so fantastic, I have decided to give a prize for the first, second, and third place winners!

So I guess you want to hear the results right?


In First Place....

CowboyErin with Spring!!
Spring,
a time of life,
new beginnings.

I see a doe,
he fawn following,
close behind.

Spring,
a time of life,
new beginnings.

I see a rabbit,
eating wet, sweet smelling grass.

Spring,
a time of life,
new beginnings.

I see a dog,
running in dew covered grass.

Spring,
a time of life,
a time of new beginnings.

Congrats! Pm Sent Cowboy!!

In Second Place...

SwimmingNeno with "To leave the life that is gone from me"

I hear the crying now
I just want to know how.
Their rudeness to us
Was like being hit by a bus.
Oh how can it go?
I just need to know.
The sadness I feel
Makes me want to keel
Over and die;
I just want to know WHY?

My feelings inside;
Oh I just want to hide!
My sadness is great
Now that Im feeling hate
Towards that day
At the end of May.
I feel so dreadfully bad
My feelings inside are sad
To leave the life that is gone from me.

Congrats! Pm sent!

And in third place, we have...

VMKFan13!!!

My poem:
Every single night,
I gaze right into the brightest light,
Thinking of someone out there,
Thinking of the same light,
Wondering if there is life.

Congrats to all the winners! I really liked Jasonpwns too, and he would have come in forth, followed by HydroAceBlaster!





:cheer2: Congrats Everyone!:cheer2:

CutieEm
04-12-2008, 11:31 AM
Bump..

CutieEm
04-12-2008, 12:08 PM
Anyone going to enter?

swimmingneno
04-12-2008, 12:13 PM
ill enter! let me find my poem!

ETA: here's a link to my poem that I posted a couple days ago...

Just Click here (http://www.disboards.com/showthread.php?t=1783412)..

CutieEm
04-12-2008, 01:41 PM
OK :Do

CowboyErin
04-12-2008, 02:16 PM
I can enter my poem, does it need to be a specific topic? :p

CutieEm
04-12-2008, 02:17 PM
no specific topic, just has to be a poem YOU make up!

CowboyErin
04-12-2008, 02:20 PM
no specific topic, just has to be a poem YOU make up!

OK, we recently had to write poems in school, so I have one, I can post it in a little bit :)

CutieEm
04-12-2008, 07:53 PM
bump

jasonpwns
04-12-2008, 08:03 PM
Every once in a while
I Happen to find myself
Looking at you during class
I can't help it your beautiful
I wish I could tell you this
But every time I try my brain locks up
Or my voice halts nothing will come out
So I write you a note and hand it to you
I walked away and none of us spoke again
I Don't think it was enough
Do you think I'm to shy
Or is it that you don't like me
Or maybe you're waiting for me to speak to you
It's not that easy,
I don't have any idea how your going to respond,
Everyday I tell myself I'm going to talk to you
But it never happens, love is full of fear
Ill tell you tomorrow before I'm to late

I wrote that a month or so ago

swimmingneno
04-12-2008, 08:06 PM
I posted mine above!

CutieEm
04-12-2008, 08:17 PM
Nice!! Good ones!! Keep 'em coming!!

HydroAceBlaster
04-12-2008, 09:00 PM
I have a small ODE:

Ode to pie:

Pie oh pie how I love you so

EDIT: Its in my writer's NB can I go get it?

vmkfan13
04-12-2008, 09:13 PM
Nature is your best friend in poetry..

My poem:
Every single night,
I gaze right into the brightest light,
Thinking of someone out there,
Thinking of the same light,
Wondering if there is life.

CowboyErin
04-12-2008, 10:07 PM
Ok here is my poem that I wrote about spring:


Spring,
a time of life,
new beginnings.

I see a doe,
he fawn following,
close behind.

Spring,
a time of life,
new beginnings.

I see a rabbit,
eating wet, sweet smelling grass.

Spring,
a time of life,
new beginnings.

I see a dog,
running in dew covered grass.

Spring,
a time of life,
a time of new beginnings.

CutieEm
04-13-2008, 09:51 AM
These are really good guys! Who knew everyone was so creative? :rotfl:

CutieEm
04-13-2008, 04:32 PM
bump

CutieEm
04-15-2008, 04:21 PM
bump

CutieEm
04-21-2008, 03:22 PM
Bump! Only a few days left!

CutieEm
04-27-2008, 11:25 AM
bump! Not too long before I choose winner!

CutieEm
04-28-2008, 03:21 PM
2 days left!

Aimbier31
04-28-2008, 04:39 PM
Every once in a while
I Happen to find myself
Looking at you during class
I can't help it your beautiful
I wish I could tell you this
But every time I try my brain locks up
Or my voice halts nothing will come out
So I write you a note and hand it to you
I walked away and none of us spoke again
I Don't think it was enough
Do you think I'm to shy
Or is it that you don't like me
Or maybe you're waiting for me to speak to you
It's not that easy,
I don't have any idea how your going to respond,
Everyday I tell myself I'm going to talk to you
But it never happens, love is full of fear
Ill tell you tomorrow before I'm to late

I wrote that a month or so ago

omg this poem is amazing and it makes me thing about the guy i like:love: p.s i'll see if i can write one

CutieEm
05-02-2008, 10:12 AM
Deciding Winners Now..

CutieEm
05-03-2008, 01:21 PM
bump!